Ha! A very different take on hyenas than what I've been writing lately, and a much better poem about zoos. I love the hyena as agent of chaos in this poem. I think you could even go even further with some of the anthropomorphic details... I almost see the hyena as a bitter ex, a drunken uncle, a family secret that's come out. Wonderful!
wild! hyenas came up in conversation last night, thus -- this. i'll definitely have to go check your page -- i recall seeing a photo, but am shamed to admit i've been swamped and just haven't had the reading room i'd like.
agreed about pushing the behavior, here. hope to play around a lot more on this one. thank you!
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i'll definitely have to go check your page -- i recall seeing a photo, but am shamed to admit i've been swamped and just haven't had the reading room i'd like.
agreed about pushing the behavior, here. hope to play around a lot more on this one.
thank you!
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