Heartbeat

Feb 25, 2012 18:08


TITLE: Heartbeat
GENRE: Romance, Real Life
RATING: GP
DISCLAIMER: I don't own the celebrities whose names were used in this fiction. 
AUTHOR'S NOTE: This is a Kohaku-related fanfiction. I know it is quite late as it is already February but I just can't stop writing when this came into my mind. Also, I read a rumor about a getting back together of an ( Read more... )

#maotsujun, #fanfiction

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newbieth February 25 2012, 10:42:59 UTC
I love it. Jun will always comeback to her as he loves her so madly ne? "Mao-chan, daijoubu?" is the best slip ever. I also imagine that he other four might be leaning outside of the door to eavesdrop their conversation lol. Thanks for writing this one-shot, especially about kohakou that I still cannot get over it yet.

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jecassie_joi February 25 2012, 10:48:28 UTC
Yey! Thank you for reading and commenting!! Yup!! That was the best slip ever! It's as if he made it clear that he was thinking and very concerned of Mao right? Actually, I was tempted to add a few more lines to the story about the rest of Arashi eavesdropping just outside the door but then I thought that would spoil the already beautiful ending (for me)... hehe... Same here.. I still can't get over Kohaku with all the Maotsujun and Maorashi moments on it.. xD

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lowlowtappz February 25 2012, 11:02:57 UTC
huhuhu I LOVE YOU TOO MAOTSUJUN hehe. Thankyou for this oh so sweet story. When I started reading this I was thinking of all the mishaps that Jun made and especially when he couldn't stop looking at Mao-chan oh you know what I mean that smirk on his face everytime is head moves to the right and left. Anyways I miss watching the full episode of Kohakou even if it was parts but on YT but I think they took it down. That was Maotsujun heaven for all us and this story is like surreal enough. Wishful thinking thats what they both did after the show.

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jecassie_joi February 25 2012, 12:49:06 UTC
Hi!! Thank you for reading and commenting... I'm glad you liked it! He was being a bit too obvious during Kohaku right?? I actually did not watch the entire Kohaku.. I skipped the performances of other artists except for Arashi and some others and instead I forwarded it towards Maorashi parts.. xD

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numonorean February 25 2012, 17:59:01 UTC
I love! Of course, like you, I would greatly prefer it if they never broke up. But this is a good alternative. So long as they are together.

Thank you for sharing this. Nice work! :)

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jecassie_joi February 27 2012, 15:06:29 UTC
You're very much welcome!! And thank you for reading and commenting as well!!

I agree with you.. As long as they're together that's fine but it would really be better if they never did broke up.. xD

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mita_sama February 26 2012, 06:27:31 UTC
It's kind of bittersweet but i love it..
Wonder what the cause of their break up on the first place...
Like all of you i still can't get enough of Kouhaku..
Thanks for this lovely fic jecassie_joi...

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jecassie_joi February 27 2012, 15:14:02 UTC
You're welcome!! I'm glad you liked it although this is actually my first time writing such story.. It is still a wonder if they had indeed broke up or if they were indeed the ones that rumor I read talks about..

Kouhaku...

A lot of things had happened there but Jun's slip was the best for me that's why I wrote this fic down.. xD

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machomiya February 26 2012, 12:34:12 UTC
yey jun and kimutakuuu.. I love them, thank you for the mention of kimutaku xdd... not forget about i love junmao too hihi.. sankyuu

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jecassie_joi February 27 2012, 15:16:22 UTC
haha!! you're welcome.. I included him since I read somewhere that during Kouhaku he gave Jun a massage when his neck started to hurt (maybe due to excessive craning of his neck in his attempts to glimpse at Mao) xD

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