Slowly Fading

[jecontrelemonde]

This was inspired by Simple Plan's song, Untitled

Comments

[odolivia]

wow. I really like that. That's really good. I like how you worked the song lyrics into the story.

oh and sammy dear? Just so I'll never lose the chance to tell you...
I love you.
very much.

<3 me

[odolivia]

i forgot to add that I also like how you told the story from different points of view...from the view of Jen and the view of Eddie. That added alot to the story.

<3 me

[blondestranger]

Thanks!
Did you get 100% of what was going on? Cause i was thinking about it while we were driving last night and i wondered if i wrote enough for the reader to figure out what was actually going on....

[blondestranger]

awww, ty....
i love you too....not in the way eddie loved jen, but my way is better :P

[rissawonders]

I printed both of the last two stories out and I am reading them today. Will comment later!!

[rissawonders]

Scared the mess outta me. um, I lke the story. I'd like to see the rest of it from the point of view of ed, tom and shelly.

[jecontrelemonde]

Lol, yay! That was the point!
Yeah, I've slowly been working on the next few 'chapters' i guess you could call them....