And I didnae need to squint to see the Seven/Ace goodness; he's practically telling her he 'wants to have her babies', but she's too upset at him for being an utter bastard to catch on.
I could very much hear Seven and Ace's voices in the dialogue
Thank you! That's what I was going for.
I liked how the Doctor didn't immediately get what Ace was upset about.
I love how the Doctor alternates between being incredibly observant and completely oblivious, so that is exactly what I was going for. Thanks for the feedback! *hugs*
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Hurray! *grins like an idiot* I'm so glad to hear you say that!
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You can never have too many Fenric post-eps.
Nice one!!
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They're just so. fucked. up. God I love 'em :p
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Hee! You saw the subtext! *grin*
Thanks for commenting. And also for bringing your pretty, pretty icon to my journal.
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HUZZAH for post-Fenric angst!
A lovely job. YOu've captured them both beautifully.
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Thank you! That's what I was going for.
I liked how the Doctor didn't immediately get what Ace was upset about.
I love how the Doctor alternates between being incredibly observant and completely oblivious, so that is exactly what I was going for. Thanks for the feedback! *hugs*
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*laughing hard*
Thanks for commenting. *grin*
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