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[jedioutcast]

Here's a poem I submitted for my creative writing minor...

Diamond Rock

My senses are so fickle fangled without your dear hand

A morbid dried out land

Left to die out here so lonely     and so freezing

The smoky water is so neatly wrapping round my brain

Driving me insane

Told to wait out here for lingering thoughts    or fading

And if you hear

Comments

[nosexforneal]

i sense anger in you...good.

[jedioutcast]

ooh, sorry, I'm afraid you read it wrong =). Try not to take a literary reading of it.

[nosexforneal]

i thought i might put in a starwars plug just to go along with the theme and that was the closest i could find =). ok sure im sad, but whatever. its a good poem. My instinct tells me its about sadness or abandonment or both. then again im also running on minimal sleep...im not the best person to ask...

[jedioutcast]

It's about withdrawal from from drugs and the effects on the people around you. Not that I do drugs, I just figured I could make a wicked poem about it.