If I would not harm God, why would I harm other divine creatures?

[jedisnon]

and the swords, they lay
in wisps of grey
upon the darkened ground

and near them slept
for whom we wept
in the morrow to be found

and the clouds above
obscured the dove
as the king was crowned

Comments

[jedisnon]

Yeah, it's orginal. Thank you.

[jedisnon]

Sure! That would be really cool.

[twoparentheses]

hey, to be honest, I never really liked your poetry too much back when I first met you sophomore year, but I can say I really liked this.

[jedisnon]

Thanks!