SPN slash (John/Sam): Come Undone (on the road to Mandalay)

[phantomas]

Title: come undone [on the road to Mandalay]
Author: phantomas
Genre: slash
Pairing: John/Sam
Rating: NC17
length: 2950 words
Notes:
- written for the jeffathon prompt: 'John/Sam; possessed, hidden.' Apologies for the delay, I had to wrangle Sam into submission (no, it wasn't as fun as it sounds).
- thanks and neverending gratitude to disanddat for helping me out

Comments

[phantomas]

eeeek!
No-no *shakes head*

My SammyWriting Fu is really hard to find, maybe one day, for now it just works that things got worse and Sammy left for Stanford ;)
but, thank you for commenting :D

[hollywood_r_bin]

I love this story. I read it before somewhere else but i couldn't seem to find it again. I like how you wrote the "there's" parts and the repetition of that. I like that John's out of control in this one too, too many fics has john in control or possessed!john in control. I like that he's the one being fucked with.

[phantomas]

Oh, thank you for commenting :D

I think John should be fucked with a lot more ;) I'm glad the structure works for you, it was hard to put it together and this outside narrating voice was driving me crazy...but hey, you like it, that's all the reward I need :D

thanks!