An Important Lesson

[jeffreycwells]

This seems obvious at first blush, but I think it's only just starting to sink in

Comments

[anonymous]

Chan, It took a while to finish (I find ebook formats much harder to read than plain text, for some reason) although I did walk around with it open on my notebook for weeks, so you had Presence, darn it! I don't know why it didn't click, although I do think it had a strong finish. Corpseflower's speech affectations hurt sentence comprehension (kept looking for actual doggs.) It may be I was expecting Mundementia One-levels of weirdness, but that's just a function of your audience. (we are small, but devoted and determined)

*places a Supertramp 8-track in the slot and drives into the night*

--otrstf

[jeffreycwells]

Thanks for the good thoughts! Yes, it's a different style of weird. Someday, I'll get to a story that has M1-style weird, whether it be a retool of M1 itself or a new and different thing.