Fic: This Time it is Our Time, [Neal Tiemann/OFC], explicit

Oct 19, 2011 22:54

For maerhys, who’s had a birthday, and a hard time lately, and with whom I offered to collaborate on a Neal/all the women multi-chaptered story. I wanted to make this filthy and stylish, bb, as your Neal!het is, but somehow this song had other ideas. I don’t know either, but I hope this made you smile a little :)

this time it is our timeNeal Tiemann/OFC ( Read more... )

fic warning hard r, fic

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jehane_writes October 28 2011, 17:49:46 UTC
Omg, girl, so glad it worked for you! IDK why this came across all slo-mo magic realism sex: I was actually listening to this song and writing this and going OMG, WHY ARE YOU LIKE THIS, SELF?

I'm glad you liked. I hope things are good. You know I adore Neal. And you ♥

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brynnmck October 28 2011, 23:13:57 UTC
Holy shit, Jay, this was absolutely gorgeous. I adore your poetic style, as always, so smooth and sensuous, and I love the MOOD of this so much--it's like drinking honey wine, reading this. And I love more than anything where they end up, that one perfect, totally embodied moment of clarity and peace. The separation from everything else that reminds you who you are. It's enchanting and seductive and simple, all at the same time--thank you for this! ♥

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jehane_writes October 29 2011, 00:27:23 UTC
Brynn, I'm glad this worked for you! And I love that you said embodied - those moments of perfect stillness where we feel most present in ourselves are (for me at least) few and far between, and to be held onto with both hands <333

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