Drabble prompt

May 24, 2012 11:05

Ok, here are my rules for the drabbles.  100 words.  No less.  No more.  Write for 15 minutes.  You can use my prompt or not, as you wish.  Write in whatever language you like.  Can be fanfic, original, poetry, non-fiction.  The point here is to loosen up.  Try not to edit too much.  Think of these as imperfect cookies: they may not look totally ( Read more... )

drabble, writing, challenge

Leave a comment

Comments 40

Violin neyah444 May 24 2012, 15:32:25 UTC
One single violin played. The notes swayed as the tune bore into his very soul shattering his heart, and he remembered. Her kisses, her face; young at first, then lines slowly appearing as a memento of her smile. They made her even more beautiful.

He remembered the melody she used to hum in his ear and the same one she sang on lonely nights beside the cradle when she thought nobody was listening. Her song was sweet, unlike the one that broke his heart now.

For the last time, he longed to hear the joyous song, that had been her.

Reply

Re: Violin jelazakazone May 24 2012, 15:48:17 UTC
Why you gotta kill me like that bb?

Good thing I've got the antidote right after yours. ♥

Reply

Re: Violin neyah444 May 24 2012, 15:52:46 UTC
Sorry I jut got home from the studio where I've watched baby monkeys in diapers for one and a half hours (we worked on Orangutan Diary) and those people who were working shouted every minute, awww look how cute.
Sooo I really needed some angst, sorry:)

Reply

Re: Violin jelazakazone May 24 2012, 15:54:43 UTC
LOL. Well, I spewed utter and complete fluff. I mean, utter. It's my remedy for too much Mordred angst, apparently:D I think we're even!

Reply


Unicorn Music jelazakazone May 24 2012, 15:42:54 UTC
Tinkling drifted into Merlin’s ear, easing him from sleep. He took in a deep breath of piney air before opening his eyes to his surroundings. Intrigued by the sound, he propped himself up on his elbow, listening for the source. It had not been there last night; he got up to investigate.

Walking softly, as Arthur had taught him, he honed in on the origin. He noticed light filtering through the trees and approached. Bending branches out of the way, he saw a unicorn, standing in the clearing, sunlight playing on the silver horn, wending a melody through the forest.

Reply

Re: Unicorn Music neyah444 May 24 2012, 15:55:32 UTC
That was really adorable:) I love it when you write fluff!

Reply

Re: Unicorn Music jelazakazone May 24 2012, 15:56:09 UTC
Hee. Thanks. I can't believe the fluffy fluff that comes out of me sometimes.

Reply

Re: Unicorn Music neyah444 May 24 2012, 15:57:37 UTC
Maybe someday you'll bring that out of me too.:P

Reply


celandineb May 24 2012, 15:46:19 UTC
"Infinite Universe"

They all sing.

From the rumbling basso profundo of the greatest hypergiants, to the mellow tones of the main sequence stars, to the shrill pipings of the tiniest white dwarfs, the stars sing.

This chorus, and the audience too, is nothing less than the universe itself.

Each star is part of it, each planet, each hurtling asteroid, each molecule of gas drifting in infinite space, all adding their own complexities, vibrating in a harmony so vast that it brings reality itself into order.

Whatever may occur on one unimaginably minor planet matters little; the grand music of existence will continue.

Reply

jelazakazone May 24 2012, 15:55:36 UTC
Gorgeous, Cel. I love this so so much. *thud* That's me falling over from how much I love it. So beautiful.

Reply

celandineb May 24 2012, 16:05:10 UTC
Aw, thank you! *blushes*

Reply

neyah444 May 24 2012, 15:56:49 UTC
Ode to the universe! Just beautiful! I really reminds me of doctor who (I rather not think about the music that was played as ode to the universe, but the concept:)

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

Re: Solace neyah444 May 24 2012, 17:29:11 UTC
It's not like the two have any similarities.
I don't know Sherlock, but I can feel the bitterness in here. So sad.

Reply

Re: Solace celandineb May 24 2012, 17:40:11 UTC
Totally okay to have two violin pieces!

Nice capture of Watson's emotions, and Holmes being sensitive to them.

Reply

Re: Solace jelazakazone May 24 2012, 18:30:48 UTC
Two violin pieces are just fine! Besides, yours is totally different.

I love that Sherlock reads John and is willing to give him what he needs here.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up