Having Day Dreams, About Night Things, In the Middle of the Afternoon-Part One

May 13, 2011 00:04


Title: Having Day Dreams, About Night Things, 
         In the Middle of the Afternoon - Part One
Author: Jellie_RayneLuv
Rating: Eventually it will be NC17 (adult content people, don't like it, don't read it)
This part has some sexual content, but the good stuff will be in a latter part.  You know how I like to bring it up to a slow boil. :)
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jellie, smut

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sunshineali May 13 2011, 23:09:22 UTC
Oh Dear, he is in WAY too deep and even being a highly trained agent, he's so out of his league. She is going to wrap him around her little pinky. Can't wait to see what she does next. :)

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jellie_rayneluv May 13 2011, 23:19:25 UTC
Oh, I think that the Colonel has some things up his sleeve so he can maintain some control of the sitch.

As for what happens next, I am working on it. Just wondering how high I can turn up the heat. Am aiming for a very high flame.

I think this may even be a three parter ... or more. You now, I can hardly ever do just one.

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goddessofbirth May 14 2011, 00:09:01 UTC
Nice! Oh, Ellie...you naughty, naughty, smart girl;)

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jellie_rayneluv May 14 2011, 00:16:54 UTC
She is a naughty girl isn't she? But she has excellent taste in lovers.

About to post part 2 which I think will end up being 4 or 5.

Thanks for reading. :)

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night_lotus May 14 2011, 02:58:40 UTC
Seems like Ellie has laid out a very well-planned trap for our Colonel.

I wonder how long it will take him to figure out that he's been caught?

I look forward to reading the next part.

~NL

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jellie_rayneluv May 14 2011, 03:17:55 UTC
Thanks! Ellie has been very "thoughtful" indeed.

The next part is up, and I'd say he is on to her now, and about to set a trap of his own. Muahahahahaha ...

Mine is an evil plan.

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brandywine00 May 16 2011, 03:00:00 UTC
Whoahhhhh! Oh, Evil Triplet, when you make a comeback, you make it with a bang! Just got your email and saw this posted.

Delicious, dear, just delicious!

And that line... "Well, did he?" ... perfect! Boom! He was not expecting that...

Skipping off to read the next section. More than two chapters? Oh, darn! LOL! ;D

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jellie_rayneluv May 16 2011, 15:34:56 UTC
Thanks Evil Trip! Glad you got a chance to read
I was going to what for Beta bit was too excited about it to wait.

Glad that you find it delicious :D I thought ot was pretty yummy, myself.

Hopefully will send you the next parts before long for you expert critique.

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basched May 26 2011, 17:19:53 UTC
I am bad for not checking up on this community often!

I miss such awesomeness as this! Well done ellie for being so sneaky and oh hells I gotta read the rest!

Excellent work! XD

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jellie_rayneluv May 28 2011, 17:07:20 UTC
Better late than never, Amy. Glad you checked in a took a peek. I had to come up with something to fill the Tank Top void, until I can get that back on track.

I am pleased that you are enjoying this. More soon ;)

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