Arashi - AU - Thank You for the Rain - 17/30

[jelly_fic]

Title: Thank You for the Rain
Chapter: 17
Fandom: Arashi
Pairing: sho/nino, nino/ohno, ohno/sho, tba
Word count: 1514
Notes: A player is in an offside position if he is in front of the opponents' defender. But it's an offense only if he's in active play when the ball touches one of his team members. This way the player can't gain an advantage by

Comments

[karmade]

Wow, you really going fast with TYR lately :0 :D 8D
And I didnt understand your note at all XDDDDDDDD

Anyway, about chapter, poor Shochi :( While everyone having fun (well, Ohmiya just had fight with bad guys >:D and Aiba-chan and Jun are going to have secret handshake and stuff) he's not :((((( And now his ankle is hurt! Poor Shochi :( Give him some cookies soon <3

[jelly_fic]

I know, I am so mean to poor Sho. I'll have to make it up to him at some point. x3

[aozora_pedaru]

Awww poor boy is injured! >.< Curious if he really can let go ... aaahh what's happening next?? Looking forward to your next chapter!!! Will that be the Ohchan chapter? ^.~
Thanks for another nice chapter ne!

[jelly_fic]

Yes, it's the Ohno chapter next! Already written! But I need to read through it before posting, ughhh. -_-;

[aozora_pedaru]

Hayai! o.O
Demo take your time with reading through it ^.^ We surely can wait a little bit longer XDD

[litany_sh]

yay, sho chapter! I loved the part where he was thinking about what would happen if Nino left--especially considering how often nino's family moves. everyone should watch sho play soccer more and make him happy!

[jelly_fic]

I think they would probably embarrass him to death if they actually stayed to watch... XD;

[litany_sh]

... that would be AWESOME! but not bad embarrassment, just the "no, that's not really my mother screaming in the stands" type of embarrassment. seriously, poor Sho needs some stress-free support.

I love this story--looking forward to Ohno's(?) POV in the next chapter. ♥

[starsystems]

...You realize that now I have to write that scene? ;o;

[fluttering]

Introspective Sho is interesting. Also lol at random KAT-TUN appearances XD

I like it when you update. :D ♥

[jelly_fic]

I don't even know why, but I love to use Kat-tun as random supporting characters. XD Maybe I just like their names...

[honeypuffed]

oh oh oh I haven't even read it read but askdughalsdg seeing this updated made my day like, 283592385 times better ♥

[honeypuffed]

..read it yet*

[jelly_fic]

I hope you liked it. x3

[honeypuffed]

Blah, forgot to come back to spam comment again. Yesyes. Of course I liked it. I love how you've constructed all the characters |DDD