Comments | jelly_fic: Arashi - AU - Thank You for the Rain

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Arashi - AU - Thank You for the Rain - 20/30

Aug 12, 2008 05:45

Title: Thank You for the Rain
Chapter: 20
Fandom: Arashi
Pairing: sho/nino, nino/ohno, ohno/sho, tba
Word count: 1816
Notes: This used to be my favourite chapter! (cough... now it might be #22...) Believe it or not, most of this chapter was written over a year ago. o_o Don't worry, I rewrote most of it before posting! (I wonder if it made any ( Read more... )

length: series, genre: au, fic: tyr, fandom: arashi

Comments 63

still_ciircee August 12 2008, 03:15:37 UTC

I am acting like a love struck fool. And trying not to giggle like a little girl. *fails* Eee! This was so cute. Ohno kissed him! Take that Ninomiya! Ohno kissed you.

Also: I love the fact that Ohno asks him to stay when it probably would have been easier to let him leave. I love that Ohno doesn't need to be saved (by anybody) and knows it. I love that Nino told him the truth--that he just sort of flipped out. I love that Ohno and Nino hid from each other in each other. I might love the boy-kissing most of all.

jelly_fic August 12 2008, 13:20:28 UTC

I think Nino might be still processing this fact. He will be properly shocked later. XD My love for a more aggressive Ohno is so transparent. *sob*

Thanks for reading and for the lovely comment. >3< ♥

i_am_zan August 12 2008, 03:16:57 UTC

Oh I sooo needed this today ... thank you!

(drowning in the question of 'to split infinitive or not to split infinitve?' aarrrghhh! *Shakes fist at grammar*)

A beautiful update ...OhMiya!!! to the nth!

jelly_fic August 12 2008, 13:23:10 UTC

Thank you! :D

(But grammar is our friend! <<; *eyes grammar varily*)

First? resolute_reader August 12 2008, 03:19:24 UTC

Uwah! I loved this part! Nino and Ohno were thinking the same thing <3

Nino getting all jealous over Sho was just so cute!

I can't wait for the next one :3

Re: First? resolute_reader August 12 2008, 03:20:04 UTC

I guess I'm not XD

Re: First? jelly_fic August 12 2008, 13:26:06 UTC

Well, maybe next time? XD

Thanks for commenting~

honooko August 12 2008, 03:20:03 UTC

dsjahfjksdhfjkdhkfj.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. ♥!

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jelly_fic August 12 2008, 03:25:02 UTC

I always feel extra special when I get the rainbow heart. xD ♥

i_am_zan August 12 2008, 03:23:22 UTC

... and this, this was just perfectly imaged Ohno smelled like the rain, fresh and cold and delicate. Nino pressed himself against Ohno, arms tightly around Ohno's head, and answered the kiss eagerly. Ohno sucked on Nino's lower lip and Nino could feel tongue and teeth and everything was so much better than he had ever imagined, even with the clashing teeth and wrong movements and awkward indecision that went with first kisses. He smiled into the kiss and he could feel Ohno's smile answering his.

I want to see this for real! ^__^ *loves*

jelly_fic August 12 2008, 23:51:16 UTC

lol, me too. ♥