More Real

Mar 24, 2009 03:38

Title: More Real
Author: jemnise
Pairing: GTOP
Summary: You want real? Here's reality.
A/N: I can't fall asleep with my heart aching because my GTOP is abused once again. HAHAHAHA XD seriously. I don't know why in the heck am I enjoying GRI, but I do. GAAAAAA XD FAIL ATTEMPT TO SAVE GTOP'S ASS XD

ok so got this from krizza's RANT. hahahaha XD REALRead more... )

oneshot, big bang, top, gtop, gd

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jemnise March 24 2009, 05:21:06 UTC
hahahaha XD you little love, fortunately i understood kgfksbdkfusdkfhgd XD

so yea, i love you jhsfdgaskgfkashtgfdliasgdf XD

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dongbangsuju20 March 23 2009, 21:12:28 UTC
*haha*
... really, I hate G-Ri to the max..
so this fanfic.. is LOVE..
sorry x-x

thanks for the fanfic

(do i have to say more?! well.. it is beautiful how you describe the differences between old and young Seunghyun and play with their names and everything.. really.. wonderful <3 Just love the last sentences <3

Even before you fall, he already caught you. That's how smart ass the older Seung hyun is.

Something that Seung hyun, the young one can never be.

LOVE <3)

enough said ^-^
*takes this into favourite list* <3
good for another reading sometime!!

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dongbangsuju20 March 23 2009, 21:14:18 UTC

GTOP cover YooSu in your header (or the other way around.. don't know.. but.. LOVE XD)

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jemnise March 24 2009, 05:22:58 UTC
YEEEEEY! fave list! thanks thanks a lot XD

pooohooo XD

that last two sentences are the ones that drove me to writing the entire thing XD ahhhh i'm flattered, really hahaha looove you XD thanks!

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f_i_x_m_e March 24 2009, 00:12:18 UTC
Waaaaa!

I loved this whole thing!
So cute in so many ways!

But even before you take a step forward, he already did. So you need not to think and worry.

Even before you fall, he already caught you. That's how smart ass the older Seung hyun is.

Something that Seung hyun, the young one can never be.

8DDDD I died.

I love you. XD

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jemnise March 24 2009, 05:23:24 UTC
hahaha i love you too XD

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bluemonkiesx March 24 2009, 01:02:49 UTC
KAJSHDKAJSD.
you're making me want to go get a GTOP icon just for when I comment your fics.
ROFLROFLROFL.

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oxygenlove March 24 2009, 03:04:40 UTC
i am abandoning you, kitty.
putting you to the dog pound for the canines to eat.

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bluemonkiesx March 24 2009, 03:10:37 UTC
PSH, WATCH ALL THE DOGS BE ALL FLUFFY AND CUTE LIKE BOSS[even tho boss isn't really fluffy].

but, NOOOOOOO. I didn't say I was going to ship gtop!
I just thought maybe I should get a gtop icon...
*hides*

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oxygenlove March 24 2009, 03:25:31 UTC
THEY ARE NOT CUTE AND FLUFFY. LIKE BOSS.
boss is cue but not fluffy.

rofl I am not forbidding you to go to gtop.
<3
i'll love all the same. even if you start shipping GBOSS.
harhar

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oxygenlove March 24 2009, 03:05:19 UTC
DAMN YOU.

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oxygenlove March 24 2009, 03:18:11 UTC
You fucking hate it.

Why is it like this? Like this that you can't breathe. Like your feelings are choking you and it's so fucking stupid cause you like him, love him, hate him, need him, want to freaking move away from him.

Damn you, hyung. Damn you, Jiyong hyung.

Don't you ever fall out of love for me. Don't you ever fall out of love for me. Don't don't don't. If you do, I will - I will.

Fall off a cliff. Jump off a cliff. Leave. Die. Curl up and just-

Oh no, you're not going to commit suicide. You're stronger than that. A strong baby, remember? Just, you want to make it clear that even if you destiny forbids you two to be one, that even if destiny is keeping you apart, that even if this love is too real to happen, DO NOT LET GO.

DO NOT FUCKING LET GO OF ME, HYUNG.

And you watch with eyes full of longing as he's allowed to have fan service with Seunghyun hyung, feed Dae hyung, sling an arm around Bae hyung's shoulder. And you watch and watch and long for the past when things weren't like this, when things weren't complicated ( ... )

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oxygenlove March 24 2009, 03:20:09 UTC
Sorry, no need to start another collab fic. I just... just when I read this, I wanted to write Ri's POV. And this just came out after reading a comment above..

".. really, I hate G-Ri to the max..
so this fanfic.. is LOVE.."

so yeah. sorry again. i just... you know the feeling right???? RIGHT? when a sudden emotion rushes and consumes you and you just HAD to write.

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oxygenlove March 24 2009, 03:26:15 UTC
zomg i feel guilty

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