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Piece of Heaven

Apr 23, 2009 02:40

Title: Piece of Heaven
Author: jemnise
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Bestfriends. Fell in love. What more? Oh. There's someone else.
Characters: GD.TOP.SEUNGRI.YB.
Author Notes: TOOK SO DAMN LONG. me struggle for a bleeding Ri. LOLOL XD so yea. i think this was requested by oxygenlove my fishbrain tells me so. dang too bad I am total >phail I don't know where would this ( Read more... )

author: j, p: gdragon/top

Comments 17

integrawh April 22 2009, 19:28:31 UTC

whaaaa.... O.o it is amazing. Almost made me cry. I'm out of words. You're an awesome writer. <3

jemnise April 23 2009, 04:26:32 UTC

ooh thanks a lot dearie XD will strive hard to make the next one good too XD

heatherxwho April 22 2009, 20:26:05 UTC

guess who's teary eyed? me. hehe.
aww. the ending was great. i seriously didn't know
which direction you were heading, but i'm happy with
which way you chose. great story. :]

jemnise April 23 2009, 04:25:00 UTC

AWWWWWWW.

i don't know too -_____-
mwahahaha XD i will try my best to write the next one properly LOL XD

heatherxwho April 23 2009, 04:26:53 UTC

properly? what's 'properly' in the world of writing? hehe.
you don't have to be proper on my account. just write
as you want. i enjoy it very much. ^__^

jemnise April 23 2009, 04:36:40 UTC

i honestly don't know too O.o mwahahaha.
thanks sooo much!

i think what i should say is, i'll try to be better! :)

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jemnise April 23 2009, 04:23:39 UTC

LOVE YOU.

mwahaha XD misses you XD

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jemnise April 23 2009, 07:59:27 UTC

you're in Seoul right? i am just here in the Philippines O.o you're like an hour ahead of us something T-T

OMFG. you write now! LOL i hope you find some inspiration! maaaang. i totally miss you and your work! O.o

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f_i_x_m_e April 23 2009, 02:43:46 UTC

*cries*
This is beautiful!
Just...
Waaaaahhh *cries more*

jemnise April 23 2009, 04:23:01 UTC

*wipes away tears*

don't cry anymore T-T

parkchoongjae April 23 2009, 03:43:49 UTC

this is not bleeding ri. but more of bleeding Ji. omg. Poor Jiyonggggggggggg. aigoo, if Seunghyun likes him and he likes him, he should not really push him to Ri. Tsk, poor kid.

Fave line: "Sometimes I wonder, why SeungRi's hands don't feel comfortable... I guess I was so used to holding yours"

TANGINA yan. I literally rolled on my bed. Namatay ako. FTW!! <333

jemnise April 23 2009, 04:22:15 UTC

because this is not yet done LOL XD

MWAHAHAHA XD i can imagine you rolling and rolling until you fall. LOL XD