Piece of Heaven

[jemnise]

Title: Piece of Heaven : One Wish
Author: jemnise
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Bestfriends. Fell in love. What more? Oh. There's someone else.
Characters: GD.TOP (.SEUNGRI.YB.)
Author Notes: owkei. this gave me a headache. i told you i am a fail in smut. but i still tried O.o cause. cause. I want to learn :p anyways. yea. slight GRI this time, but of course

Comments

[f_i_x_m_e]

YOURE KILLING ME HERE, WOMAN.
This is too good.
*lives off angst*

[jemnise]

EK *revives you* hey, don't die on me sweetheart :)

[parkchoongjae]

SPOT?

EDIT //

WAAAAAAAAAAAAH. (alam mo magtatagalog ako kasi mas gusto ko. naiinis ako kay Ri e. )

start rant // Seungri, wag kang assuming okay? Di kasalanan ni Jiyong na siya ang mahal ni TOP. Poor you baby, pero well, GTOP is meant to be in this situation. Sana maintindihan mo yun, anak. Wag kang assuming, okay? // end rant

WAAAAAAAAAH. I totally feel for Jiyong in this fic. He's the one sacrificing damn it. I feel for Seungri too, but yeah. It's TOP's decision who to chose anyway and he loves Jiyong so yeah. Ri, you need to give up, baby. Mommy will just hug you okay? :)

[jemnise]

BLEEDING RI. ROFLMAO XD

HAHAHAHA Ri, just go to your mommy... oopsies. Bae is still waiting:)

[parkchoongjae]

ah... baeri ba ito? hahaha. XD sana bleeding sya hanggang dulo. haha.

[jemnise]

HAHAHA XD okay sige na nga.

Bleeding Ri.

Bleeding Bae.

BWAHAHA XD

[mugimugul]

ahhhhh waaaahhh T^T
its not ji's fault!!!!!
tell seungri already!!!!
breaking his heart earlier should be way better than breaking it later!!!
'cause by then.. ji would be feeling so bad..
n then seungri would be super sad...
and the rest would just be awkward for them..
and then TOP... i don't know!!! T__T
but what if Ji decided to give up just 'cause he couldn't stand seungri feeling so sad??!!!
WAAAAAHHHH
ok ok i should stop now.. before i go crazy

[jemnise]

HAHAHAH OMFG. thanks for the long... rant? LOL really appreciate it ^^ makes me happy :)

[mugimugul]

X] erm not really sure whether i should say ur welcome... but sorry for the rant lol!!!
i was agitated and hypeed from readin ur fic... ^^""

[jemnise]

hahaha no no. rant here anytime you want to! my space is where all rants are welcome cause i do that most of the times too! LOL XD

[bluemonkiesx]

GAH, ALSJHDKJASHD.
killing me AND converting me.
aish.
you are shameless<3

[jemnise]

MWAHAHAHA

MWAHAHAHA. i never. ever. expected you to even read this. but you just made my day.

YOU WRITE GTOP PUHLEASSSSSSSSE?

[bluemonkiesx]

GAH, ME?! WRITE GTOP?!!?!!?!?!!!
I don't think I'm that converted yet. ROFLROFLROFL.
does it count that in Love Songs there was just a itsy bitsy tiny implied GTOP?
XD

BUT YEAH. i read gtop now, aksjhasd only some authors. LIKEYOU<3

[jemnise]

EHHHHH. Pretty please? For me? OH! write TOBAE! LMAO XD pretty please please? XD
HMMM. you know what. I have yet to read that. *slaps self* dang. imma print it all out and read in office goodness gracious O.O

ooooh thanksies! *blushes* i guess gtop writers should write more!

GUYS CONVERT THIS GENIUS!!! XD

[heatherxwho]

is this a one shot?

love triangles are never fun, especially if you're all
friends. sucks for Seungri, but TOP and GD love each other.

[jemnise]

it was supposed to be T-T but i don't know now O.o ROFLMAO XD

yea it was never fun O.o gaaaa i am aiming for bleeding ri though T-T

[heatherxwho]

hehe. okay. i was just wondering since it had one of those
endings where it seemed like there was a next part.

no pressure for you to add to it...unless you want to though
you know. ;)

bleeding Ri? ah. yes. bleeding indeed.

[jemnise]

HAHAHA O.O thankssss.

I am actually experimenting *hides* you see, i don't write smut, so i try to. I try to be different in endings. Actually, thanks for noticing that. LOL XD cause that's what i was aiming for. Open ended kinda' thing. I can continue it or not. LOL XD

but yea. its official. imma continue this. LOL XD

again i am experimenting with my writing so forgive me T-T