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jemnise

Safeguarding Altruism

Apr 28, 2009 20:37

Title: Safeguarding Altruism
Pairing: GRI
Author: jemnise
Summary: TWO ONE SIDED. Get it? Because they are fools. And because there are no happy endings in real life.
AN: Okay. so yea. I saw the prompt in gdheartri and was like, I WANT TO WRITE! LOL XD First, because *slapsself* there gabajillion of GRI nowadays. Second, because TODAE is killing me. ( Read more... )

p: gdragon/seungri, author: j

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oxygenlove April 29 2009, 06:49:53 UTC

i am...
right now...
trying to be happy...
so..
i...
will...
not read this until later.
LET ME SPAZZ WITH A HAPPY LIFE FIRST!
*goes and watch bae's concert again*

jemnise April 29 2009, 10:31:50 UTC

HAHAHAHA XD THIS A SUPPOSED HAPPY FIC!

HAPPY! SO READ IT AND BE HAPPY! CAUSE I'VE WRITTEN GRI, MADE TORI BLEED. AND ABSOLUTELY KILLED GTOP.
its even nonexistent in this fic tsk O-O

LOLOLOL XD

oxygenlove April 29 2009, 10:52:07 UTC

i meant...
the tori bleeding...
i do not need angst...
only now!

i'll be back later!!!!!!!

jemnise April 30 2009, 05:20:25 UTC

LOLOLOL XD dude, you're supposed to just be GRI.. cause you're selfish and you're a killer.

you always kill me T-T

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tenshibattosai April 29 2009, 07:10:55 UTC

OH NO, I'LL READ THIS TOMORROW, I PROMISE. I just need to get some sleep, and get through my 16 hour day, haha~

I'll get back to you, hold on tight. ;D (Though why anyone would anticipate my comments, I don't know. They're so lateeeee, haha~)

jemnise April 29 2009, 10:42:42 UTC

ooohhhh... rest well dear! i hope you will not curse me, or swear or whatever. LOL XD

AHAHAHAHAHA XD I WILL *holds on tight*

tenshibattosai May 3 2009, 04:04:32 UTC

OKAY, OKAY, YOU HAVE TO IGNORE THE FACT THAT THIS WAS SOME 16x5 HOURS ----

This was amazing! They really are fools, not able to see the other loves them. And how true this really is! How many times I've seen people who are so convinced the other doesn't reciprocate any feelings, and never get anywhere even though they could.

your salvation is in his hands and he's never letting go of it. I'll never let go of you too. You thought.

There was just something in this line that really caught me and I don't know what, so I'll just quote it anyway. :)

I loved this story even though it took me forever to comment on it! Good job. :)

haelin April 29 2009, 16:15:04 UTC

i'll read tomorrow then i'll try to comment this weekend PROMISE..^^

haelin April 29 2009, 16:18:34 UTC

and i owe you a HUMONGOUS APOLOGY for the 2ne1 letter i was supposed to send but but but some things happened and i wasn't able to write.. and yeah i lost my glasses *how many times have i said this already at my other comments to other posts*.. please please please I'M SORRY just forgive me.. T_T

jemnise April 30 2009, 05:24:51 UTC

YOU KNOW WHAT? You're lucky. You can like email me until saturday? yea. cause I haven't sent the stuffs just yet :)

oh and i'll hold to your promise! you owe me one! LOLXD

haelin April 30 2009, 05:49:54 UTC

oh and i'll hold to your promise! you owe me one! LOLXD

ate, ano po gusto mong gawin ko to prove that i'm willing to make up for sending the letter late? anything! basta po walang koneksyon sa arts at math at basta kaya ko pong gawin..^^

sa friday ko pa po makukuha new glasses ko pero try ko parin po gumawa ng letter today or tomorrow..

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jrocker9314 April 29 2009, 21:22:20 UTC

WOW. AMAZING. You are a great writer. Really. :]
TODAE is killing you too? Me too. I love them. xD

jemnise April 30 2009, 05:25:43 UTC

oh jeez thanks.

oh. TODAE IS KILLING ME... in a bad way O-O sorry. but dae makes me jealous like hell T_________T

jrocker9314 May 4 2009, 20:05:05 UTC

youre welcome :)

haha oh gotchya gotchyaa. yeah, dae makes me jealous sometimes too lol

oxygenlove April 30 2009, 13:29:48 UTC

I fail at loving you. T.T
I swear. Tomorrow, I will read it.
I swear.

THIS IS SPOT FOR MY EMO COMMENT.
<3

jemnise May 3 2009, 06:37:22 UTC

i wonder where's that emo comment now? O-o

oxygenlove May 3 2009, 07:14:07 UTC

it is here!!!
wait.
haha.

oxygenlove May 3 2009, 12:01:41 UTC

Yeah. I think you hate Tabi now. You... hurt him so much. ANd you like hurting my poor Ri too. And hurting Ji too.

How can you hurt three people all at once?

But really, this one is good. I like the idea of them being each other's hero. How RI saved Ji from the very beginning and how Ji saved Ri from TOP. And I like the idea of Ji just so hopelessly in love with Ri. This is just pure love.

And do you know which part I liked the most? The part where Ri went to Seynghyun's house and saw him outside, drinking. That means... Seunghyun still loves Ri (in a way). And Ri still feels something for him. But Ji... being the stupid martyr that he is... just stands there and watches, his heart bleeding too, as he wipes Ri's tears.

REALLY... that scene was just heartbreaking.

And happy ending? WA. I felt depressed reading this. T.T

I want a happy GRi fic NOW.
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