Title: You make it real
Author: jemnise
Pairing: GD-TOP
Genre: Angst. Fluff (???!). Smut (????!)
Rating: NC17
Summary: left and found again.
A/N: just a try. ROFLMAO XD I've been writing this one for days! I want to show MYSELF that I can write fluff (all because of
miraa ) and that I can write smut too! (blame
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"OH FUCK ME HARD THIS TIME BABE" That was the signal. You hear the word fuck everytime you hit that certain spot and so you know that you got him, you just so got his spot. You inserted your third, skinny finger that made him place the palm of his face, covering it and screaming every now and then. Who will not? He is getting finger fucked while you also does masturbating for him. But its not just him that finds pleasure for all of this for you, yourself is enjoying this very sight. Your lover, your hyung screaming out of pleasure, naked in front of you, not to mention, you got him in both your hands.
You got him completely.
And that's where you got me completely. &hearts
You never meant to hurt her, you never meant to say those words. But it had been crazy. You left Choi already, then you got back, and then he left you. He left you because he knows you're in pain, because he doesn't want you to choose him over your mom, because he doesn't want you to hurt your own mother, your own father, your family. He doesn't want ( ... )
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i was scared as hell to post this. LOL XD i know people would go O.O with Ji topping TOP, but c'mon TOP needs something different LOOOOL ^________^
and I got you, awwww thanksssss dear ^_____________^
ILU :)
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I've been trying for a while to figure out just how it would work, but not brave enough to try it, and viola, here you've done it, marvelously. *___*
I know you said we're to blame for this smut, but if I do successfully write it, it will be you to blame! &hearts
ILU 2! ^^
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It made me tear up.
I don't know what to say!
...Great job!
*hugs*
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*hugs back* ILU XD
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lol when i saw that vid i was like i hope someone catches that and makes a gif 8D
now someone needs to make a slow motion one 8DD-------
this was beautiful :D
i was sad seunghyun had left ji but then i wasn't b/c he did it so ji wouldn't be in pain
the smut :X was different but still awesome
:O ji tops? lol it's hard to picture it D: since he is so fcuking skinny &has a feminine like body. Seunghyun is tall and his body, is that of a man :O
ji going back to seunghyun when almost everyone around him oppose the way he is and who he is with, is love
true love conquers all ji so dunt worry seunghyun will stay by you :D
great job :D continue to write wonderful GTOP love
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sajgdjagfafskj i knew that was coming! LOL XD but yea, Ji gets fuck almost everytime O.O so i just wanted to turn the table MWAHAHA XD and Ji can be a man too... though he's so feminine, you're right O.O LOOL XD
YEA. GTOP FTW~~~ XD
awwww thanks a lot dear XD
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i friggin' squealed and played it over and over again just to make sure my eyes
weren't deceiving me. haha.
second, your smut was hot. not only hot, but it was Ji giving it. niiice.
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hahahaha XD my smut. LOOOL =.= Ji has to give more sometimes XD
thanks for reading dear. ILU XD
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Ji is standing next to Ri too, especially if TOP is on the
complete opposite side. grr...but luckily i stuck around to
watch the whole thing. ^^
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YEA! everytime i see that ji is standing to ri and then top is at the other end standing beside dae or yb, sometimes I don't even save that photo or just don't watch the video O.O but fortunate for me, a friend noticed it :p
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<333.
This was so hot<33. the gif is hot also! XD
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