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Stutter and Rain

Mar 03, 2009 22:25

Title: Stutter and Rain
Author: Jemnise
Pairing: GTOP
Rating: G
Disclaimer: never will be mine -___-
A/N: answer to some prompts. I completely forgot to post these last night since I was too busy spazzing over some GRI love and some love of my own hahahaha XD these are done during my Diplomatic Practices and Procedures (a boring class, for real). ( Read more... )

big bang, top, gtop, fiction, gd

Comments 8

parkchoongjae March 3 2009, 16:02:56 UTC

stuttering in the rain.

omg. this is one beautiful oneshot. grabe sobrang kinilig ako without even thinking about their gender. shet. nabaliw ako.

stutter.

shet. napakabittersweet. demmit.

vangelynn March 3 2009, 16:50:59 UTC

SPOT. Must eat lunch first >__>

vangelynn March 3 2009, 20:21:01 UTC

I had a nice looong lunch ^_^
The first one was my favorite out of the two. It was like a scene from one of those k-dramas. The scene, where everyone starts crying and their hearts warm.

"then what are we, aliens?" a soft chuckle was enough to ease SeungHyun's heart that had been in agony for the past days.

"We are just lovers Ji, lovers... because I love you and..." instead of making the older finish his words, JiYong pressed his lips against SeungHyun's. But even before they could intensify the kiss, Jiyong broke their liplock as SeungHyun whispered;

"I'm not yet done with my words" his lips formed a smile as JiYong answered;

"Let me finish it for you..." he took a deep breath and said; "and I love you... more"

That part. That part was what killed me. ^_^ Jiyong, such a sweetie...

fullofwishes March 3 2009, 17:53:38 UTC

u___u
Huuu...these are nice.
I especially like Stuttering in the Rain because you didn't break them in that one...it's so sweet.

veronica1975 March 3 2009, 18:09:14 UTC

"All of a sudden, they heard screaming, running back and forth. They felt raindrops, water that washes all the worries away, washes all the drawbacks that they had."...beautiful image thanks Jem for sharing...hehehe and GRI one? don´t think so for me...hahaha see you...aND you should wtache the new season of Supernatural...so much J2 hehehehe

snb123 March 3 2009, 20:46:57 UTC

OMG! That first one was precious! I loved the line:
"I can never let another tear fall from those fucking gorgeous eyes."
*Dies*