Pride - Part Twenty

Dec 20, 2007 01:54



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arieltachna December 20 2007, 02:15:57 UTC
Go, Billy!

Orlando's obviously in so much pain, and he has every right to be angry, but I'm glad Billy had the guts to stand up to him and point out the mistakes he was making. Someone needed to.

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krazykitten46 December 20 2007, 03:28:51 UTC
Billy to the rescue. I bet nobody would have thought that he would walk into the lion's den and face Orlando down. I wonder what's in the basement, a punching bag maybe? With Viggo's picture taped to it? Orlando's emotions are so close to the surface and yet so jumbled. It's going to be a long couple of weeks.

bon

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Pride 20 sagaluthien December 20 2007, 07:12:41 UTC
Go Billy! Someone does need to make Orlando take the bull at the horns. Even I can understand that you want to beleive it isn't nessassary and you can handle it. Look forward to see how Billy will help Orlando.

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mistress_pol December 20 2007, 08:22:57 UTC
Oooooh...that last paragraph has me intrigued.

Reading thru much of this, all I could do was think "Go, Bills!" Love seeing a bit more of him. And so...forceful. *shiver*

Poor Lij! He's had one of his best wanking fantasies turned into a real dick-shriveler. Hee!

I think I've turned into Pavlov's Dog when you reply to comments - cause usually it means you've posted another chapter! :P Unfortunately, my mum was here when I realised you'd commented, so I couldn't really say "Oh hey Mum, just excuse me for a minute while I go read this fab Vigorli slash, yeah?" She'd be withholding my Christmas presents (and since I picked them out, that would be dire)!

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livdh December 20 2007, 08:52:29 UTC
Go Billy ! It's the only way to help Orlando.

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