I'm glad you liked this chapter hun, Its sort of the rounding off of the first arc of the story. At one point the fic was actually going to end around here. But hey, the muses insisted on more, so more got written!
I am completely caught up on this enchanting story!!! Words cannot describle how much I am loving every moment!!! I didn't want to overwhelm you with a lot of comments but I promise to comment on each chapter from now on!!! *squishes*
i love how you lead the story, not a single acpect forgotten or dismissed as not important. very realistic and gripping, i'm always happy to see this pop up on my flist :)
*giggles* CHILDREN! how old is lorna? am i being stupid and just not seeing it? ah, loving the cat fight. YES EAT THE FISH! MAKE IT ALL GO AWAY! *evil eyes the fish* ah, my only claim to someone having a childish crush on me would br bruno lawson, but his mom's famous so i should get extra points. i wanna be down with the lingo *pouts* i love your characterization of orlando's family. ah hello kitty mentions. my sister is obsessed with hello kitty. scarily so. i now intend to fetch my tortoise. wonderful chapter. i look forward to more. xxxx
OK... Lorna is 9. Cat fights are fun aren't they? LOL err fish? Go you on the famous connection... my claim to fame is having lunch bought for me by Danny John Jules (Cat from Red Dwarf) while working on a kids TV show LRTV. Orlando's family are characters I've thought long and hard about, and tried to get right. Hello kitty is slighty freeky anyway... Tortois??? *backs away*
I'm glad you like story hun, more soon, I promise.
i decided to make up for my laziness at not giving you comments, i'd give you proper comments. *nods* cat fights are fun, not between actual cats though, cause then someone might get hurt. someone was eating fish, i don't like fish, i'm trying to rid the world of it. i have not heard of danny john jules, cat or red dwarf. i think you got the family members perfect. hello kitty is very freaky, i can't sleep in my sisters room, i feel like i'm always being watched. my tortoise is called sweetpea. he is lovely and a speed machine. i look forward to the more. *hugs back* xxxx
Lovely mother and son moment. The crash of Sean's girls is adorable but it got me thinking. Sean obviously passed on his shapeshifting abilities so where did Orlando get his from? I bet it felt good talking about Viggo too. I guess they did need this time apart and will be better for it when they are reunited. All together nice feeling chapter.
Hey, so happy you liked this. I'm not saying anything about how Orli came to be how he is... as I've said before, its something that will be revealed in time... as for Sean's girls... well kids are just cute!
The time Viggo and Orlando are apart is vital in my opinion and you'll see why soon... I hope.
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I'm glad you liked this chapter hun, Its sort of the rounding off of the first arc of the story. At one point the fic was actually going to end around here. But hey, the muses insisted on more, so more got written!
Thanks for the comment!
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*huggles*
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Thanks for the comment! *smooch*
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CHILDREN!
how old is lorna? am i being stupid and just not seeing it?
ah, loving the cat fight.
YES EAT THE FISH! MAKE IT ALL GO AWAY! *evil eyes the fish*
ah, my only claim to someone having a childish crush on me would br bruno lawson, but his mom's famous so i should get extra points.
i wanna be down with the lingo *pouts*
i love your characterization of orlando's family.
ah hello kitty mentions. my sister is obsessed with hello kitty. scarily so.
i now intend to fetch my tortoise.
wonderful chapter.
i look forward to more.
xxxx
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OK... Lorna is 9.
Cat fights are fun aren't they? LOL
err fish?
Go you on the famous connection... my claim to fame is having lunch bought for me by Danny John Jules (Cat from Red Dwarf) while working on a kids TV show LRTV.
Orlando's family are characters I've thought long and hard about, and tried to get right.
Hello kitty is slighty freeky anyway...
Tortois??? *backs away*
I'm glad you like story hun, more soon, I promise.
*Hugs*
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cat fights are fun, not between actual cats though, cause then someone might get hurt.
someone was eating fish, i don't like fish, i'm trying to rid the world of it.
i have not heard of danny john jules, cat or red dwarf.
i think you got the family members perfect.
hello kitty is very freaky, i can't sleep in my sisters room, i feel like i'm always being watched.
my tortoise is called sweetpea. he is lovely and a speed machine.
i look forward to the more.
*hugs back*
xxxx
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The time Viggo and Orlando are apart is vital in my opinion and you'll see why soon... I hope.
Thanks again, sweetness! *huggles and smooches*
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