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bowiscute145 February 10 2008, 10:37:05 UTC
*cheers*
yay! new chapter!!!!
hee hee, orlando's had a makeover, inside and out.
reading with a pen hanging out the side of his mouth. - in which he must look adorable.
ooooh. orlando's not going to like that. *hurries back to reading*
oh it's so lovely.
i think i can hear a gun or something, i really shouldn't be able to, i'm in the middle of town.
i look forward to more.
xxxx

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jenexell February 10 2008, 11:13:04 UTC
Jeeze woman, are you trying to kill me with these comments! LOL!

*deep breath*
Yep, Orlando has definitely had a makeover, although, its closer to say he's back to old self! *grin*
It really is a cute image isn't it? Its just something I can so see him doing.
Christ... hope its just a car back-firing.

*grin* Glad you're still loving this. and thankyou for the comment! *huggles* More next week.

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bowiscute145 February 10 2008, 12:25:23 UTC
damn you've caught me out, my plan is to kill you. ARE YOU CRAZY? of course i'm not trying to kill you, if you were dead you wouldn't be able to write.
i'm not dead so it's okay.
more next week? i shall hold you to that. (can monday count as next week? 8innocent fluttering eyes*

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belle_lestrange February 10 2008, 10:42:10 UTC
*squee* so so happy to see another chapter of this :D and it was awesome like always. i really like the orlando you have "created". the club kid with the flashy clothes and all. *cuddles him*
i can't wait for more!

*hugs*

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jenexell February 10 2008, 11:14:46 UTC
I'm, not sure I actually created this Orlando. From everything I've read and seen, this is actually what he was like back in his guildhall days. (and even if it wasn't, its easy to picture!)

Thanks for the awesome comment hun, I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and the story. More next week. *huggles and smooches*

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belle_lestrange February 10 2008, 11:31:35 UTC
oh i know what you mean but...yeah well people (esp mags lol) tend to say a lot of things so i am never entirely sure if it is true or not *g* but i always picture him like this (and sometimes wish we had that baby!o back rofl) lol and reading this makes me want to go out more...but i am a real homebody...

aw i can't wait for next week now *bounces around*

*kiiiiisses*

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Pride 24 sagaluthien February 10 2008, 11:41:33 UTC
I have to say it again... each time I see a new chapter of this I throw myself in and is it fully to the end and wep the minute the chapter is over.
Great one again and as the guys have get things of their chest it will be so interesting to see how their relationship will developed from here.

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Re: Pride 24 jenexell February 17 2008, 13:32:31 UTC
Awww... don't weep! be consoled that there is always more coming. (plus possibly a sequel when this is over!)

The guys are certainly moving to new territory now, but have they really got past all their issues? *ponders*

Thanks for the lovely feedback sweetness! I'm glad you're enojoying this! *huggles*

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tati February 10 2008, 12:06:11 UTC
Orlando reacted just like i expected, and i'm glad you didn't draw out the uncertainty for them ;) i'd rather see them on the road to more than friendship *fingers crossed*

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jenexell February 17 2008, 13:34:38 UTC
Drawing out the uncertainty would ahve been angst for angst's sake. In real life people tend towards wanting to resolve things, and men especially aren't all that fond of grudges unless its about something REALLY bad. It seemed the most realistic to have them call truce.

Besides, you're not the only one who wants to see them moving forward! *grin*

Thanks as always for your awesome feedback babe! *smooches*

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alran February 10 2008, 12:14:37 UTC
I really like this new-old Orlando.
Thanks for a new chapter, a real Sunday treat.

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jenexell February 17 2008, 13:36:14 UTC
Sunday treat huh? I like that idea!

I'm glad you like the way I've portrayed orlando. as with everthing in this fic, I've tried to make it as real as possible (not that people turning into big cats is all that real *frown*)

Thanks for the comment hun! *hugs*

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