Comments | jenexell: Pride - Part Twenty Eight

jenexell

Pride - Part Twenty Eight

Mar 09, 2008 14:48

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vigorli, pride, fic

Comments 34

lenalove March 9 2008, 17:55:34 UTC

jenexell March 23 2008, 20:51:22 UTC

Hee... It sounds like you enjoyed this chapter as much as I enjoyed writing it! LOL. Sometimes its the little things that make the difference.

So thank you so much for the comment, and sorry for taking an age to get back to you.

*hugs and smooches*

laura_iskra March 9 2008, 18:33:48 UTC

this was all kind of amazing, the attentivenss of viggo, orlando muttering about boyfriends and previously realizing he's being wooed..
awww just awww!

jenexell March 23 2008, 20:52:24 UTC

Squeeeeee! I'm so glad you liked this. Sometimes you just have to feel the love! LOL.

Thanks for the comment hunny, and I promise next time it won't take me two weeks to reply!

ireth06 March 9 2008, 22:33:10 UTC

It's the little things that matter and are more heartfelt!! Go Viggo!! And yes Orlando, you're being wooed for sure!

I loved the : Chomp, Snap, snap, chomp, pause, POP.
It had me ROTFLMAO once I figured out what the fuck it was suppose to be!!! It can be sooooo bloody annoying!!

So between school being tiresome and aggravatingly annoying, and Viggo wooing him, I think Orlando is doing great!!

Now just change honey! It will make things better *apart from shagging with the new boyfriend!*

LOVEZZZ!!! Thanks for sharing,sweety, hugs and kisses!

jenexell March 23 2008, 20:54:02 UTC

*ponders* change or get shagged... i wonder which he should do...

You're right about the little things though, and that was the whole reason for the chapter. Love in everyday life. (annoying gum popping and all)

Thanks for the awesome comment hun, and sorry it took so long to reply.

mistress_pol March 9 2008, 23:37:38 UTC

*adores* ♥

jenexell March 23 2008, 20:54:25 UTC

*squeals* *smooch*

zee113 March 9 2008, 23:59:33 UTC

It's good to write you feedback at least because from your reply I can know right away when you post the next chapter :P

Wonderful, slow, gentle chapter; it also means wonderful promises for the future (especially added to last chapter's "maturity")... :D

And all that CHOMP CHOMP PAUSE POP had the desired effect on me too. May I slap her?

jenexell March 23 2008, 20:56:30 UTC

Sadly my reply won't mean a chapter this time. *look sad* My beta has gone awol, so until I can get in contact with her, there will be no new chapters.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter, and can appriciate the value of the slow and gentle. Although I can say when, I can say that the next chapter will certainly make it worth it.

*huggles and smooches*

PS. Feel free to slap her.