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jackieville April 2 2008, 20:47:50 UTC
Delightful chappie *giggles* I can just see Vig and Sean pushing Orli into the lake!

*huggles*

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jenexell April 6 2008, 12:04:02 UTC
*giggles with you* and as they said... he had it coming! cheeky cub! LOL

Thanks for the comment hun! *huggles*

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Hurrah, you're back! (We missed you) gattodoro April 2 2008, 21:44:15 UTC
Duracell kitty! :D
'Run' He did! *g* a masterpiece of economy.
Orlando in the pond! (Eww, hope he's had his shots). Unconscious snuggling! (awwww *wibbles*).

Another awesome chapter babe, how wonderfully you capture the rhythms of daily life spiced up with a little male bonding.

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Re: Hurrah, you're back! (We missed you) jenexell April 6 2008, 12:05:21 UTC
Sometimes daily life is more interesting than the extraordinary... at least IMO. LOL.

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter (and yes Orli has had his shots!). Thanks for the feedback! *smooch*

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tati April 2 2008, 21:45:31 UTC
here i was about to crawl off to bed and bam! refreshing my flist one last time results in some excited bouncing and squeeing LOL

what a great chapter, and i can't decide what i loved more - the tease at the end (can't wait for the next update now!), the older pair ganging up on Orlando in the beginning (‘What is he? The bleedin’ Duracell kitty?’ LMAO priceless line :D ) or the quietness in the middle. this content mood, the feeling of dissolving into this... togetherness, it was amazingly written (yes, i'm quite sure i'd been a feline in my past life, and it resonated so powerfully through me *g*). and the unconscious way Viggo and Orlando drifted towards each other, awww... *happy sigh* can go to bed happy now ♥

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jenexell April 6 2008, 12:09:30 UTC
Squee, I'm glad you got to go TO bed happy, and that you enjoyed the chapter so much. I know exactly what you mean about being feline in a past life... *pouts for inability to purr* But anyway... This chapter took a lot of careful working, the interaction between the pride is something I can see so clearly in my head, but I want to come across perfectly when I write it!

So all thats left to say is thankyou for your awesome comment, and the next chapter will be up soon. (mwahahahah, I'm an evil tease and I know it!)

*huggles and smooches*

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fenlika April 2 2008, 21:54:17 UTC
Is this Cestrum nocturnum your plant? It may be too cold in english winters for it to live there.

I love your story (should have said/written that before...).

Fenlika

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jenexell April 6 2008, 12:11:24 UTC
YES YES YES! That is the exact plant! Thank you so much. (my mother is thrilled beyond imagining!) As for it being too cold... well the one in my mum's garden in spain has survived some severe frosts and even heavy snow, so maybe not... but who knows!

Thanks again for this and I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! *smooch*

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lenalove April 2 2008, 22:01:10 UTC
jenexell April 6 2008, 12:14:26 UTC
Well I'm going to apologise anyway! LOL. Sorry its been so long, I'm glad you stuck it out this long. And thank you so much for the awesome things you said (most original, exciting and compelling? *blushes furiously*)

I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter so much, so a huge final thankyou to you for the amazing comment! *pounces on you* *huggles and nuzzles*

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