Pride - Part Thirty

Jan 18, 2009 15:04



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lenalove January 18 2009, 15:28:38 UTC

tati January 18 2009, 15:43:48 UTC
"wow!" was my first reaction when i saw the banner pop up on my flist :) soooo happy to see this again! the little scene after Orlando's nightmare was so emotional, and i'm incredibly glad and grateful to you for not letting it dissolve into angst, but instead make it another huge step in their relationship. the last scene was just great, i felt like i was watching it all happen, it was so realistic, the dialogue and everything :)) and the last line just made me giggle - Sean won't hear the end of this when Molly asks her mother this question! LMAO

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laura_iskra January 18 2009, 15:51:50 UTC
awwwwww awwwwwwwww awwwwwwwwwwww
I'm so incredibly happy to read this! and what a rollercoaster of a chapter! the last scene in the kitchen was utterly perfect..
I'm so so so incredibly glad that you're writing this again!

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ireth06 January 18 2009, 16:05:16 UTC
I'm glad Orlando didnt runa nd Viggo didn't let him. One thing dealt with.

So Orlando still has bad dreams ... Something should be done about that (but that's just my opinion ... and mainly because, damned hun, I really want to know what the fuck happened..!)

I loved the banter in the kitchen, so very well done!
Thanks for sharing, this is so very well worth the wait. I'm glad you're continuing this!
*hugs you ever so tight!*

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jackieville January 18 2009, 16:54:07 UTC
I am so happy to see you and have been thinking about you like crazy!!! *squishes and clings*

Love this chapter! I'm so happy Viggo didn't let Orlando run away! This story is always worth the wait!

*loves*

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