Uh Oh! Jack, Owen - stuck in a small bathroom - sounds like fun. Not! Hope this means Owen will no longer be isolated. This story seems so well thought out. Excellent.
No, Jack and Owen in a small bathroom sounds like hell! lol.
I'm so glad you're liking this, and thank you so much for your wonderful comments. I'm sorry I seem to have missed out replying to your comment on the last chapter. Not sure what happened there, but thank you so much for that one too!
I really like the way you're slowly building things up in this story. The underlying tension of the mystery is being ratcheted up bit by bit, and it has a lovely effect on the tone and mood of this story.
You also do a great job of capturing how stir crazy Owen is getting in this situation. His voice really comes through, as does his snarkiness. Jack's balancing of his concern with humor is very fitting as well.
I'm very intrigued by the situation you're continuing to develop here, and I'm eager to see just what happens next. Fantastic job! This story is really engaging.
Your comments are so good for my ego. Just thought I'd let you know that. *grin*
I'm so glad you're enjoying this and thank you so much for your wonderfully detailed and insightful comments. I hope you keep on enjoying the rest (and not just for my ego's sake!)
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*sad face*
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I'm so glad you're liking this, and thank you so much for your wonderful comments. I'm sorry I seem to have missed out replying to your comment on the last chapter. Not sure what happened there, but thank you so much for that one too!
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You also do a great job of capturing how stir crazy Owen is getting in this situation. His voice really comes through, as does his snarkiness. Jack's balancing of his concern with humor is very fitting as well.
I'm very intrigued by the situation you're continuing to develop here, and I'm eager to see just what happens next. Fantastic job! This story is really engaging.
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I'm so glad you're enjoying this and thank you so much for your wonderfully detailed and insightful comments. I hope you keep on enjoying the rest (and not just for my ego's sake!)
Thanks so much again.
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