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fide_et_spe February 24 2013, 22:16:24 UTC
This is so interesting, I look forward to seeing how it plays out.

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jenexell February 27 2013, 18:07:47 UTC
Glad you're still enjoying it. thanks for the comment.

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ttfan February 25 2013, 01:55:26 UTC
*huggles you* You know I adore how you write Owen lol. Well done babe. xxxx

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jenexell February 27 2013, 18:08:06 UTC
Should I be jealous of your Owen love?

*sad face*

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ttfan February 27 2013, 20:03:56 UTC
No sad face! And you definitely shouldn't be. xxx

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sandiw64 February 25 2013, 02:13:46 UTC
Uh Oh! Jack, Owen - stuck in a small bathroom - sounds like fun. Not! Hope this means Owen will no longer be isolated. This story seems so well thought out. Excellent.

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jenexell February 27 2013, 18:09:24 UTC
No, Jack and Owen in a small bathroom sounds like hell! lol.

I'm so glad you're liking this, and thank you so much for your wonderful comments. I'm sorry I seem to have missed out replying to your comment on the last chapter. Not sure what happened there, but thank you so much for that one too!

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krazykitten46 February 25 2013, 11:19:30 UTC
Poor Owen.

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jenexell February 27 2013, 18:09:41 UTC
Awww... *pets him* Thanks for the comment hun.

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larsinger29 February 25 2013, 17:18:32 UTC
I really like the way you're slowly building things up in this story. The underlying tension of the mystery is being ratcheted up bit by bit, and it has a lovely effect on the tone and mood of this story.

You also do a great job of capturing how stir crazy Owen is getting in this situation. His voice really comes through, as does his snarkiness. Jack's balancing of his concern with humor is very fitting as well.

I'm very intrigued by the situation you're continuing to develop here, and I'm eager to see just what happens next. Fantastic job! This story is really engaging.

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jenexell February 27 2013, 18:11:30 UTC
Your comments are so good for my ego. Just thought I'd let you know that. *grin*

I'm so glad you're enjoying this and thank you so much for your wonderfully detailed and insightful comments. I hope you keep on enjoying the rest (and not just for my ego's sake!)

Thanks so much again.

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larsinger29 February 27 2013, 21:22:44 UTC
I'm glad they help! ::grins back ( ... )

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