Comments | jenexell: [FIC]Into the Storm - R

jenexell

[FIC]Into the Storm - R - 5/6+epi

Mar 03, 2013 10:27

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sempiternitas, jack harkness, fic, janto, ianto jones

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sandiw64 March 3 2013, 21:19:47 UTC

Great chapter. I really feel for both Jack & Ianto. Jack, the burdens of leadership (especially one forced upon him) & everyone expecting him to always get it right & know what to do & make the hard choices (good luck with that). And, Ianto, a complete feeling of helplessness - not knowing if he can trust Tosh or anyone for that matter, in these weird surroundings. But, I expect you have figured this all out & will make everyone, including me, happy or reasonably happy in the end!

jenexell March 6 2013, 19:28:49 UTC

Ummmm... Happy? errr... guess you'll have to wait and see.

Thanks for the comment. glad you've enjoyed it so far.

spud1963 March 4 2013, 09:28:37 UTC

omg poor Ianto again lol an poor Jack. Things getting harder for them. Can't wait till the last episode hehe

jenexell March 6 2013, 19:29:37 UTC

Last episode is up. and yes, Poor Ianto (again) and Poor Jack... Yeah, sorry for not being very nice to the boys so far.

Thanks for the comment. Glad you're enjoying the story.

laura_iskra March 4 2013, 11:36:07 UTC

mmmhhh.. not envying neither jack nor ianto at the moment.. or poor awkward tosh!

still wondering what will happen to ianto now :p

jenexell March 6 2013, 19:30:05 UTC

I'm a bit mean making you wait aren't I?

Oh well.

Mwahahahah!

harshinib March 4 2013, 12:15:59 UTC

wow great chapter, really liked Jack's musings, felt very real and appropriately dark. Looking forward to finding out what has happened to Ianto, what the pattern is, and what sort of decision Jack will have to make about Ianto's future

jenexell March 6 2013, 19:30:55 UTC

Dark is very much a feature of Jack of this period of time. at least that's how I see it. So much pressure, both from outside and within.

Thanks for the lovely comment. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.

larsinger29 March 5 2013, 03:28:50 UTC

Lovely installment! The tension continues to mount, despite some clarity being given. The uncertainty over what exactly is happening with Ianto still looms large though, and is definitely pervasive throughout this chapter.

I very much enjoyed how Tosh acted as the calming agent. It fit her personality nicely, and really underscored her value to the team for more than just the tech stuff. I also really liked how you explored how Ianto and Jack were each handling things. You continue to give great insight into Jack and how he is dealing with this situation. And Ianto's bewilderment and resigned nature comes off as very natural and fitting.

Fantastic job! I'm still so very much enthralled in this story, and look forward to seeing what happens next!!

jenexell March 6 2013, 19:33:28 UTC

Its like what they say about two sides of the same coin... they can never see something from the same perspective. I wanted to explore the events from the two extremes, and I'm so glad that seems to have come across.

As for Tosh... come on, who doesn't love Tosh? LOL.

Thanks so much once again for such a constructive piece of feedback. I hope you keep them coming.