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ukdramafan April 22 2013, 01:12:17 UTC
Great chapter. Love the attention to detail, and how Ianto's skills - while not yet quite recognised - are starting to show. Yes, they should hang their heads in shame, that they've increased hub security, while leaving Ianto vulnerable. They still consider him a potential threat, so there should have been a panic button in the tourist office (even if it was just to protect them from him!)

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jenexell April 24 2013, 09:24:46 UTC
The TW team are a bunch off shitters sometimes aren't they?

And its the mixed feelings that leads to the odd gaps. Jack is all about the 'threat' while Tosh is all about the 'friend' owen and suzie sit somewhere in the middle and no one knows what to do.

I'm glad you're enjoying things so far and thank you for the comment!

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sammydragoncat April 22 2013, 01:19:44 UTC
Loved the update! Poor Ianto, he didn't even have a panic button in case of emergency!

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jenexell April 24 2013, 09:25:09 UTC
Just another oversight frm team TW... *sigh*

Thanks for the comment hun!

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bluelilacs April 22 2013, 05:46:27 UTC
Poor Ianto, so afraid of Jack and not escaping from the kitchen soon enough to avoid him. Jack hardly had time to register that he was there before he was gone.

How sad that the only thing that occurred to any of them was Ianto doing something wrong. Not one of them even considered that he might be trouble, which is really pretty lame when you take into account just what they do there. Tosh is the only one who treats Ianto anywhere near human, but even she didn't think to provide him with any kind of protection. It's a good thing he listens and remembers, since he was basically hung out to dry up there on his own with no thought what-so-ever given to his safety. If not for his quick thinking, they wouldn't even have noticed there was anything wrong.

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jenexell April 24 2013, 09:28:27 UTC
You're right they wouldn't have noticed... but thats one of Ianto's great strengths in the show, listening learning and noticing things when the others have their heads too far up their rear ends to see anything at all. In Tosh's defense tho, she has got a lot on her plate right now.

As for the scene in the kitchen, that was one of the clearest scenes in my head while writing this fic, and it was a giggle to write.

Thanks as always for the amazing feedback. I'm so glad you're still enjoying this and I hope you continue to!

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jedi_harkness April 22 2013, 05:47:15 UTC
Great update, so very curious about this "toy".

Hopefully Ianto will get that panic button soon...

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jenexell April 24 2013, 09:29:07 UTC
oooh.. the only one to pick up on the 'Toy'. *applauds*

More will be revealed soon.

Thanks for the comment!

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royalladyemma April 22 2013, 06:32:14 UTC
I'd love to visit that little museum!!!

Just read straight thru Into the Storm and now I'm up to date here -- mesmerising! Cannot wait to see what happens next!!

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jenexell April 24 2013, 09:30:31 UTC
WELCOME!

Wow, you read all the way through from the beginning to here? thats a fair whack... hope it wasn't in one sitting, would hate to be responsible for you getting eye-strain or a migraine. :(

Lol.

ah well, you made it this far! Thanks so much for commenting. I'm so glad you've enjoyed it so far. More soon!

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