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larsinger29 April 24 2013, 19:18:24 UTC
Oh goodness, that was quite the invigorating chapter! I love how you gradually ramped up the tension at the beginning, and then went full out at the end. It worked nicely, and had me at the edge of my seat, only to be as floored as Owen when Jack popped up with his quip ( ... )

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jenexell April 28 2013, 09:31:03 UTC
Next Part is up now ( ... )

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fide_et_spe April 24 2013, 20:39:28 UTC
Oh dear, it's just getting worse! I love the ideas in this, the aliens with blurry faces, the spidery things, Ianto's strange energy. Can't imagine how it all connects but I'm sure it must!

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jenexell April 28 2013, 09:31:59 UTC
I'm so glad you're enjoying all the stuff I'm doing here. Lots going on, so much its giving me a bit of a headache to be honest! lol.

All connections will be revealed in the next part, which is up now!

Thank you for the comment!

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krazykitten46 April 25 2013, 16:08:48 UTC
Such panic and confusion. Leave it to Jack to find a way out while everyone else is falling apart.

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jenexell April 28 2013, 09:32:38 UTC
Yep, thats very Jack. He's not superman, but he's certainly something! lol. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the comment!

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