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bluelilacs April 28 2013, 23:16:09 UTC
Wonderful, intriguing chapter.

Jack may be a pompous ass sometimes, but he definitely values his team, and isn't afraid to let them know it when it counts. Now if he could just get his head straightened out where Ianto is concerned.

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jenexell May 1 2013, 17:32:03 UTC
Jack get anything 'straight'? errrr... not sure that's ever going to happen. as for Ianto. hang tight he will get there.

Thanks for the comment! Glad you're still with me!

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laura_iskra April 29 2013, 13:13:32 UTC
wow, what a great couple of chapters!

I'm loving the pace and the characterization is spot on, I love competent tosh and the detail of suzie removing her shoes.. love it all!!

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jenexell May 1 2013, 17:33:40 UTC
Ta very much! Glad you enjoyed! You know it always amazes me what little details stand out for people. I only put the shoes thing in coz it bugged me knowing how much noise heals make on concrete stairs! LOL

Thanks for the comment hun.

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jedi_harkness May 8 2013, 06:10:42 UTC
Once again, Jack's the hero! Too bad they didn't go after that slime...

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