Loved the epilogue! Between Jack and Suzy, I'm sure that Mr. Salls will wish he stayed under Torchwood's radar. I hope your muse cooperates - I love your teaser.
I love your header for the next story, intriguing!
Really nice epilogue here, I like how you've taken the trafficking and slavery issue seriously, using Suzie's POV. So pleased they were able to help Mon.
Great story, I like how you use humour, and keep up the pace, so it never gets bogged down, and keeps us hooked!
the teaser looks promising... more Ianto centred...
I liked the epilogue, good way to resolve it... But I would say, the Welsh are often even more anxious to point out, that they are not "bloody" English... Just have to think about this Interview with Gareth, when his daughter was born... A very special breed! (and Welsh is more alive than Gaelic any day)
Oh no, my comment was no attack, at all and yes, it were suzie's thought. I have Welsh and Scottish friends, was in Wales and Scotland and it was rather interesting to talk about the topic. My Scottish friend is thinking, the Scottish will in the end decide against independence. We will see. But if it comes to the feeling, wales is feeling more like another country, but we will see, what the future brings. Suzie is no more (ok, in your story she is still alive) but anyway...
You're not the first to suggest introducing Mrs Miggins to Janet. The idea has merit, although is rather morally questionable! LOL.
So yeah, poor Ianto missing out again. More Mrs Miggins fault than Jack's, although Jack is probably relieved Ianto is being kept out the way. He can't help being a suspicious bastard really.
The next story will come eventually. Glad you liked the teaser. Thank you for understanding and thank you so so much for all your wonderful comments on this series. Its much appreciated!
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Really nice epilogue here, I like how you've taken the trafficking and slavery issue seriously, using Suzie's POV. So pleased they were able to help Mon.
Great story, I like how you use humour, and keep up the pace, so it never gets bogged down, and keeps us hooked!
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Also loving that you say I keep you hooked. what every writer wants to hear! thank you so much for the comment and for sticking with me!
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I liked the epilogue, good way to resolve it... But I would say, the Welsh are often even more anxious to point out, that they are not "bloody" English...
Just have to think about this Interview with Gareth, when his daughter was born...
A very special breed!
(and Welsh is more alive than Gaelic any day)
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Looking forward to the third instalment
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*climbs down from high horse*
*looks sheepish*
Reading back, even trying not to, I didn't come across very nice there did I?
Can't apologise enough there, and thank you again for reading and taking the time to comment. I AM trying not to be so protective! lol.
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So yeah, poor Ianto missing out again. More Mrs Miggins fault than Jack's, although Jack is probably relieved Ianto is being kept out the way. He can't help being a suspicious bastard really.
The next story will come eventually. Glad you liked the teaser. Thank you for understanding and thank you so so much for all your wonderful comments on this series. Its much appreciated!
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and I loved the mention of poor ianto harrassed by mrs. miggins..
take all the time you need, I'll be here ready to read when you're done :p
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No-one on the team was expecting what they found with Mon, and none of them are happy about it. (obviously) we will be seeing more Mr Salls later on.
Unfortunately we'll also be seeing more of Mrs Miggins... deep joy.
Thanks again hun! so glad you've enjoyed this!
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