[DEATHNOTE] Fic: Tea with the Hare and Tortoise

[jengou]

This came out of nowhere. I was relatively content (though desirous) rewatching Deathnote eps 30, and sighing "Mm, Mello," and "Ah, so hot." All of a sudden there were these vibes and then a Near/Mello fic dribbled out

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[indulge]

LDS;HGOISFHGAKGJ

I snorted coffee from laughing.
That was awesome.
Marry me♥? xD

[jengou]

Whee! I was so worried, cos all those who had commented before were friends and I was suspecting this sucked and NO ONE TOLD ME. Thank you! ♥

Oh sure why not? XDDD

[indulge]

It made my night and I laughed a lot. Linking people to it right now, actually.

Haha. XD

[jengou]

Woohoo~~ thank you lots! What a kind wife :D

[jengou]

Whee, thank you very much! This was my first DN fic, still getting to grips with the characterisation too~ ^^ Mello is awesome fun to write! He's so impatient, and so full of spaz XD Near mostly creeps me out. Just watched eps 34, did you see how he was filing the feet of doll Mello? CREEPY.

[jengou]

Haha, thank you! I thought the punch lines were kinda flat in a lot of places - I keep going back and rewriting sentences. I'm relieved you like :D

A Matt/Mello fic, that's ALL I WANNA DO! Why won't it come to meeee? I've a few chapters to go in rereading the manga before Matt appears, so hopefully I'll get an idea then :D And, for shame, I never actually post prOn, so just decided to use it anyway XD

[phishy]

Haha, cute! :D

I especially love that last line--it is Matt saying that, right?

Yeah, I knew there was a reason that Mello was so bitchy most of the time! Oh, Mello, you know that you secretly want to be deflowered by Matt; don't deny it! xDD

Nice one! ^^

[jengou]

Whee, thank you! :)

Hahah, you can interpret as you like~ but if you remember Mello spazzing over the thought that Near was gonna enact the incident with his puppets...? Yah, Near's playing with his puppets and totally has the hots for Mello :p :p

Sorry I wasn't clearer! I agree with you 100% that Mello secretly wants to get deflowered by Matt though! ♥

[phishy]

Ah, I get it now!

*was clearly braindead yesterday* ^^;

Oh Near, you sly bastard, you! xDD

[jengou]

Naah, you weren't the only one who asked, I wasn't clear~ no worries!

WOOHOO we have the same icon! and Near is such a perv XD

[gitarre_engel]

nice! I loved Near's line at the end... xD Who is saying those lines at the end before you wrote END? =P Just wondering...

[jengou]

Ahaha, I don't think I was clear enough - the lines at the end are said by Near, playing with his puppets, totally having the hots for Mello :p You're not the first person to ask, I should fix it ^^;

Glad you still enjoyed it! :)

[gitarre_engel]

lol I read it again and I can just imagine Near doing that... haha nice..! ^_^ thanks for clearing that up. and no problem, it was fun to read :D

[jengou]

Thanks! :D Near is creeeepy~~