[OURAN] FIC: Sorry versus Apology

[jenhippo]

Author: jengou
Title: Sorry versus Apology
Word Count: 542
Rating: PG
Pairings: Kaoru/Hikaru
Spoilers: Episode 15
Disclaimer: Ouran High School Host Club was created by Hatori Bisco.
Summary: Kaoru wants to hear "I apologize" but Hikaru says "I'm sorry" instead. So Kaoru accepts "I'm sorry", but then Hikaru says nothing at all.
Notes: This fic

Comments

[elict]

oh my. yes, yes, yes, yes you made me happy! really happy! ...even though this is reeeaally sad... you tell me all the time that i always nail kaoru and write him really well, but hey, after this, i won't allow you to say that anymore, because wow! you defenitely manage to write him really well too! wow!

...the last line is my favourite, because it sums up the fic so well.

and d'aaawww... the closeness between the twins, the way that kaoru takes hikaru for granted, in a way... when he can do that. because that is how it is, isn't it? they've always takin each other's for granted, and now that just isn't there anymore... except for when they're alone, like in the beginning of the fic.

...i feel like writing angsty kaoru point of views again... >__>

thank you so much, hon! you really are the best!

[jenhippo]

I'm super glad you feel better! Was really worried, don't like the thought of you unhappy (I always imagine you in those cool jeans! Those jeans are too happy to be unhappy in!). Tix to Japan aren't too expensive if you travel after Xmas, e.g. 26th December!

Heh, I realized that Kaoru is easier to write when he's allowed free reign to be emo :p Still want to write In-Character Kaoru crack though.

I think Kaoru is trying very hard now to not take Hikaru for granted, trying to lower his expectations, but they can only go so low... He shouldn't have to grovel for Hikaru's attention. Want Kaoru to preserve some dignity *koff* The more painful bit for me to write was Kaoru having to indirectly ask for the "I'm sorry" comment from Hikaru. If that were in the anime, I think I would cry.

Write moooore angsty Kaoru POVs! And, awww, you're always welcome :)

[elict]

kaoru is too emo for his own good... i will never be able to make him happy like that T__T

sorry for the petty answer, but crocodile dundee is on tv right now, and i wanna watch it ^^'; so, uh, tlak to you more later, hun!

*hugs*

[elict]

and hey, you have a writer's journal! why didn't you tell me! *goes off to friend*

[jenhippo]

heh, because i made it so i can hide it from my flist! Two of my real life friends on flist are redheaded twins, I'd feel really bad if they saw this :-/

[elict]

haha really? that's great, tell them hi from me! (you don't have to tell them in what topic we brought them up ^__~)

[usagipon]

;O; SADS! BUT GREAT!

[jenhippo]

Aww, my first time writing angst, feel so guilty for inducing sad feelings! *GUILTS!* But thanks for enjoying(?) it!

[hidden_gems]

That "Our days just aren't fun without our toy around..." line has always hurt me so much...

Beautifully done. Thank you.

[jenhippo]

Thank you for your kind comments!

My writing has always been more efficient (for essays) than aesthetic, so not being able do this just a little 'beautifully' was my greatest insecurity. Thank you so much for the reassurance! It's like you saw right through me :,)

line has always hurt me so much...

asfjakjfkd. *agrees*

[hidden_gems]

Well, no need to worry so much, because I think you definitely pulled it off ^^

[aiko_yamada]

[jenhippo]

Thank you, thank you! It's like you saw right through all my insecurities and then was kind enough to dispel them at the same time :,-) *bows*