[DEATH NOTE] Fic: Poppies, Mello/Hal, PG-13

[jenhippo]

Title: Poppies
Author: jengou
Pairings: Mello/Hal, mentions of Near and Gevanni.
Genre: Fluff
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Spoilers for the entire manga
Word count: 926
Disclaimer: My love for M/H, it is hot and fiery! Death Note still isn't mine though.
Acknowledgement: Written for kefanii, as backstory for the wonderful Hal/Mello art she drew and scapebread coloured for

Comments

[x_drear_x]

'booger flicking fiend', LOL, you know I love your Mello!

[jengou]

Ahahaha, that was actually a reference to my capslock_dn post 8D That's why the kids at Wammy don't wanna play with him!

Thank you for the speedy beta, and also confidence boosting! Was biting my nails a fair bit with this one ;)

[historyblitz]

"I chose you because you're morally gray and slightly more attractive than that Gevanni guy.”

Very smooth, Mello. XD

I really adore this pairing! YAY!

[jenhippo]

Woohoo! Happy you adore it too~! And, haha, I don't get the impression that Mello is good with women (e.g. the prostitutes kinda ignore him). Lucky Hal isn't so picky or something 8D Thanks for you comment ^^

[nami_assasin]

Awwwww^_^

The after-the-explosion Mello suits so nice with girls *___*

[jenhippo]

So much fluff, right?! XD

Ah, that is so true! His image doesn't go with girls at all before explosion... how odd O_o (but goes very well with Rod, nyahahah).

[nami_assasin]

Yesyes Fluff ^^

Ahaha, before the explosion Mello is waaaaay too girly to have a girl XD Rodd is so huuuuge thats why they suit each other. Since we don't know how Matty looked like aroind the age of 17-18 ;___;

17year old Matt <3

[jenhippo]

Hahaha, I've always harboured the thought that Matt was a fatty as a younger kid. The extra chaptered proved me wrong tho!

[phishy]

Eeeeeeee!

Love, just... love. Mello was adorable in this (eg. "booger-picking fiend"). Which, of course, explains why Near is such a social deviant. XD

And Mello/Hal is the sexiest het pairing evar. <3 fluffy!Mello. &hearts

Thanks for sharing!

[jengou]

Aww, I'm so happy you liked! Was hoping you would, since I know you appreciate Mello/Hal ^__^ Did you ever write your Mello/Hal+Matt walking in on them fic?? Be sure to let me know if you do, I'd love to read!

Haha, that's exactly it, that's why none of the Wammy kids wanna play with Near~ Like, one hand holding puzzle and the other hand flicking boogers in random direction. Ewww~

Thanks for reading ♥

[phishy]

Well, you're among my fav Death Note authors, and M/H is among my fav Death Note pairings, so of course I loved it!

As for the Mello/Hal+Matt... that's sort of taken a backseat to rl (ie. school has pretty much eaten it). But, when I do finish that M/H, you'll be the first to know. ^__^

XD Your Near theory must be canon!

[jengou]

Whoop whoop! :D

Ah, I understand~ yep yep, be sure to let me know :-) I just put death_eyes and death_note back on my flist, so if you post there I should see it!

Haha, and Gevanni would give Near tissues when he starts, and Near'd give him a look that says, "wtf am I supposed to do with this tissue? Gevanni, my estimation of your intelligence has gone down 9%". D:

[versipellis]

Nice work - I liked the throwaway lines about Gevanni, and the snarky relationship between Hal and Mello.

[jengou]

Aww, many thanks :-) Gevanni was surprisingly fun to make fun of. I am slightly tempted to write a fic where Mello 'persuades' Gevanni to be a spy for him, and the awkward hilarity that ensues.

And I'm glad you liked the snark, I enjoy writing those bits best~