The Most Natural Thing

[jenlee1]

Title: The Most Natural Thing
Author: jenlee1
Rating: PG-13
Setting: SH ‘09 movieverse
Word count: 2300
Warnings: Spoilers for the new film.
Summary: Train car, post-munitions factory.  Missing scene from AGoS.
A/N:  Written for a fic prompt by the lovely enkiduts asking for Holmes’s POV near the end of this particular scene, though it grew a bit from what I originally

Comments

[esteefee]

oh wow. oh, dear lord, you know how to make it hurt so blissfully sweet. and this is exactly, precisely what I believe he was thinking, feeling in that train car. what a brilliant bastard he was, because he did see it so inevitably. what a short respite it must have been.

“What in God’s name were you thinking?”

A perfectly reasonable question, for all that it misses the point entirely.

you are so amazing m'dear.

[jenlee1]

Thank you, dear! That's very high praise indeed. <3

*blushes furiously*

I do think that Holmes knew, at that point... and once decided, there was nothing left to do but follow through.

Thanks again for the kind words, and for the rec - they're very much appreciated, and I'm so glad that you enjoyed it :)

[neverminetohold]

What an absolutely beautiful, sweet yet painful, piece about one of my fav. (am I weird for that? °-°) scences of the AGoS movie! It's more than enough to pull me out of lurking around your journal, to finally leave some well deserved praise ^-^

Thank you so much for writing and sharing!

[jenlee1]

Thank you! That's quite a lovely compliment, and I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. <3

I was oddly fascinated by that scene as well... loved what we were given in the film, but couldn't help wanting something more. And so we have fic, I suppose ;)

[neverminetohold]

Just got the DVD into my hands *flails* Now I will forever think of your version when I watch it - I love it when me being a slash fangirl improves my world view ;)

Exactly - just did the same with "The Avengers" fanfic LOL

[hey_doey_doey]

That was so wonderful. There are so many bits I want to point out, but I think I'd end up just quoting the whole thing back at you. So lovely.

[jenlee1]

Thanks very much! Glad to hear that you enjoyed it ;)

[tinx_r]

How beautiful. Well done.

[jenlee1]

Thank you! Glad it pleased :)

[anne85]

Oh, this is so sad! :-(
Very good missing scene! I really think it happened this way! ;-)

[jenlee1]

Yes, poor boys... Holmes had rather a rough time of it, I'd say.

Thanks very much for reading! <3