It's The Journey- Part Four (SB/OB, PG)

[jenmstar]

Title: It’s The Journey- Part Four
Author: jenmstar
E-mail: jenmstar@gmail.com
Pairing: Sean Bean/Orlando Bloom
Rating: PG
Archive: northern_softy orlandoslash fellow_shippers bean_squee
Disclaimer: This is all fiction.
Beta: None. Please let me know if you find any mistakes.
Notes: Part One Part Two Part Three

Comments

[doylebaby]

Hobbits an Elf and food *shakes head* terrible combination. Love the way they kept distracting each other. Sean isn't obvious at all. *snicker*

[jenmstar]

Hee! Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it.

[zillah975]

*g* I'm really enjoying these. I especially like seeing this scene from both points of view, Sean and Orli each with their friends' comments and just the whole thing is really entertaining. I'm not much of a Bean/Orli girl, but this series is really charming and a lot of fun. I'm always eager for the next part.

[jenmstar]

I'm so glad you're liking it. I always love hearing from someone that they don't care for a particular pairing but they're enjoying my fic of it. I'm hoping to have more by the end of the week. *G*

[punk_pony]

er... love the story, but.. can I make some suggestions?

"Dom tried to steal a piece of bacon from Orlando in relation for the stolen strawberry.

I think that should be Retaliation..

and

"...he’s staring at his food the way he started at Liv when that costume girl opened the door to her trailer..."

Stared?

Other than that, it's keen!

[jenmstar]

Thank you, both for the corrections and the nice comments. I really appreciate them!

[punk_pony]

I really do love the story. I'm just uber anal retentive and an English major to boot. :-D

[jenmstar]

NP! I asked for people to tell me if they found any mistakes, and I meant it!

[fanyan]

lmao.. no fair about teasing lando :p

[jenmstar]

Hee! Sometimes it's just so easy *G*

[fanyan]

definitely too easy *grins*

[telesilla]

*dies* So funny; I love food stealing!

[jenmstar]

Thank you! I wasn't sure if it would read as funny or just distracting. I'm glad it's working as funny. *g*