FIC: Suds (SB/VM, NC-17)

Sep 25, 2004 22:46

Title: Suds
Author: jenmstar
E-mail: jenstar2421@yahoo.com
Pairing: VM/SB
Rating: NC-17
Archive:fellow_shippers bean_squee rugbytackle sons_of_gondor
Disclaimer: This is all fiction.
Beta: None. Please tell me if there are any mistakes.
Notes: For the lovely moldava who was kind enough to beta something "with that Orli creature" in it. *hugs*

Suds )

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nieninque121 September 26 2004, 00:03:16 UTC
Ooooo...suds!sex, very luscious.
brilliant. =D

one thing though, the end of line 4, "...where it sounded like Sean's voice was coming from", i think you meant Viggo's voice.

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jenmstar September 26 2004, 00:11:03 UTC
Thank you. Am very glad you liked.

*meep* Thanks for telling me. Is fixed. *hugs*

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bluespirit_star September 26 2004, 02:44:56 UTC
The image of these two beautiful men waist deep in bubbles is just burned into my brain.
*guh*
Fabulous - thank you!
*hugs*

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jenmstar September 26 2004, 14:13:24 UTC
*hugs* Thank you.

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kira_k September 26 2004, 03:11:47 UTC
wow :)
lovely picture you planted in my mind... *drools at Sean and Viggo and bubbles...* Thanks for it :)

Um, I guess, you left out a noun here: "Viggo swatted at the Sean as they left the room."

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jenmstar September 26 2004, 14:15:34 UTC
Thank you. Am glad you enjoyed it.

Yeah, my bad. Thanks for telling me.

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dalehead September 26 2004, 03:56:56 UTC
Guess what! I love this! There is only one thing better than your Vigbean (and yep you guessed right, your Orlibean) but this was cute and sexy and gorgeous and I love you!!!!

Yeah," Viggo said, rubbing himself against Sean. "I guess we'll just have to make due" - you mean make do yeah?

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jenmstar September 26 2004, 14:17:58 UTC
Thank you. Am so glad you liked this. *hugs*

Yeah, thanks for telling me.

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rosi September 26 2004, 04:10:36 UTC
Huh. Well, I can tell you that liquid dishwashing soap doesn't do very well in the dishwasher machine either.

But if Viggo wants to try, I'll be happy to read about it. ;)

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jenmstar September 26 2004, 14:18:55 UTC
Yeah, Viggo's not so much the handy man in that relationship. *g*

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