Title: Suds
Author:
jenmstar E-mail: jenstar2421@yahoo.com
Pairing: VM/SB
Rating: NC-17
Archive:
fellow_shippers bean_squee rugbytackle sons_of_gondorDisclaimer: This is all fiction.
Beta: None. Please tell me if there are any mistakes.
Notes: For the lovely
moldava who was kind enough to beta something "with that Orli creature" in it. *hugs*
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brilliant. =D
one thing though, the end of line 4, "...where it sounded like Sean's voice was coming from", i think you meant Viggo's voice.
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*meep* Thanks for telling me. Is fixed. *hugs*
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*guh*
Fabulous - thank you!
*hugs*
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lovely picture you planted in my mind... *drools at Sean and Viggo and bubbles...* Thanks for it :)
Um, I guess, you left out a noun here: "Viggo swatted at the Sean as they left the room."
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Yeah, my bad. Thanks for telling me.
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Yeah," Viggo said, rubbing himself against Sean. "I guess we'll just have to make due" - you mean make do yeah?
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Yeah, thanks for telling me.
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But if Viggo wants to try, I'll be happy to read about it. ;)
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