Ficlet: Pushing (VM/OB, NC-17)

Oct 02, 2004 10:34

Title: Pushing
Author: jenmstar
E-mail: jenstar2421@yahoo.com
Pairing: VM/OB
Rating: NC-17
Archive: vigorleancult orlandoslash fellow_shippers Any one else just ask.
Disclaimer: This is all fiction.
Beta: None. Let me know if you find any mistakes
Notes: For marialayne. Thanks for the ideas. *g*

Pushing )

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moblo413 October 2 2004, 17:47:24 UTC
*stares*

*stares some more*

GUHHHHHH. So good. So very, very good. Again, I don't know how you do it in so few words, but it was wonderful!

*hugs you*

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jenmstar October 2 2004, 20:57:42 UTC
Thank you so much. This one was odd for me. I'm glad you liked it so much.

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french_hobbit October 2 2004, 17:55:14 UTC
i really loved the intense dynamic of this, especially what's left unsaid: Viggo silently removing Orlando from Sean's lap, and Orlando silently agreeing to Viggo's questions. Great ficlet.

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jenmstar October 2 2004, 21:00:50 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

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queen_mean_jean October 2 2004, 17:59:17 UTC
It is amazing how something so short could pack such intesity!!! Delightful!!! Loved it!!!

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jenmstar October 2 2004, 21:01:24 UTC
Thank you. Am glad it worked for you.

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dalehead October 2 2004, 18:34:08 UTC
Jen you never, ever disappoint! This was *meep* gorgeous though personally if I'd have been Sean I'd have insisted on keeping Orli....

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jenmstar October 2 2004, 21:02:29 UTC
Thank you. I wanted Sean just to keep Orli, but when someone asks for a VigOrli, it doesn't work all that well to write an OrliBean. *g*

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dalehead October 2 2004, 21:19:22 UTC
*snorts* No I see your point!

Btw - know I shouldn't do this here but can't be arsed to log in elsewhere - your latest CP with H/K was so fucking moving that I stopped to have a little cry. You're brilliant!

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jenmstar October 2 2004, 21:30:00 UTC
Thank you so much. I was going to tell you... I'm planning on posting links to those logs in my LJ so that people can leave feedback because I reallywant feedback about those.

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uinendolothen October 2 2004, 18:49:53 UTC
oh god ... I love them!!!

As always, you are fabulous ... and that was fabulous. *hugs*

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jenmstar October 2 2004, 21:08:59 UTC
*hugs* Thank you for the kind words.

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