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May 12, 2005 19:40

Let it all out
get it all out
rip it out remove it
don't be alarmed
when the wound begins to bleed

cause we're so scared to find out
what this life's all about
so scared we're going to lose it
not knowing all along
that's exactly what we need

and today I will trust you with confidence
of a man who's never known defeat
but tomorrow, upon hearing what I did
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Wow sesshomaru_8 May 12 2005, 19:01:04 UTC
That was really good. I love free verse poetry, too. There's a lot more freedom in not being constrained to a certain rhyme scheme. I've actually been writing poems every day. Probably one a day, but I've been editing them, I'll let you have a look at them in biology tomorrow.

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Re: Wow jenn15 May 13 2005, 04:00:54 UTC
ok :)

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