Your Smile (Part 2)

Feb 13, 2008 12:25

  
Title: Your Smile (Part 2)

Pairing Subassan/OhYass

Rating: Not sure

Summary: Triangle between Subassan and OhYAss.

For a few second, Subaru’s mind went blank. Not being able to produce a word.
“Moshi moshi, Shibuyan.”

“This is the worst joke Hina.” says Subaru, finally able to regain his ability to speak.
“No Shibuyan. I’m serious. I received a call ( Read more... )

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iloveryok8 February 13 2008, 06:31:13 UTC
oh no another cliffhanger....hope you update soon..getting impatient already.
so many things i love about this fic..too much to comment on. anyways thanks. can't wait to see how you wrap it up.

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arigatou gozaimasu.. jenntego February 13 2008, 07:11:32 UTC
wow, dats fast. glad u find it lovable. i can't wait to wrap it up too. if only i can settle this conflicts i have. anyway, i'll update it soon as possible. thanx..

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chibi15 February 13 2008, 08:15:40 UTC
Oh noes! Yasu doesn't remember Subaru! What is he to do!

Great Job! I love the story!

Can't wait for another update!

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je_forever February 13 2008, 08:32:42 UTC
Oh no Yasu doesn't remeber Subaru? That's bad!
Can't wait for another chapter - I love this story!

je_forever^-^

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whited_79 February 13 2008, 09:58:01 UTC
why didn't Yasu remember Subaru, the love of his life??? oh this is sad!

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amanche February 14 2008, 15:53:42 UTC
I love it!

I feel it doesn't mean to be sad when Yasu forgets Shibuyan but it seems more like a proof of the Subassan love. Although Subassan was more in the focus, i like how Subassan/Ohyass and everything are very well-balanced...and the characters sounded 'realistic' (well maybe not the typical Maru but he was good there).

Looking forward to your update.

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jenntego February 15 2008, 05:30:02 UTC
thank u. i'm glad u like it. i enjoy writing it. i love them all just the same so i tried put everyone in the pic. hopefully i can come up with a good wrap of this story.. keep on reading ok.

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