Story Time

[jennybliss]

Title: Dave's Thoughts
Author: jennybliss
Character: Dave Karofsky
Rating: R for language
Word Count: 1004
Genre: Gen
Status: Complete
Summary: Just some things that Dave thinks about
Warnings: Language, some homophobic slurs.
Disclaimer: Not my toys, but I played nice and will give them back when I am done.
Note: This is for the gleeverse Challenge 29 - STORY TIME

Comments

[captain_love]

That's heartbreaking but I love it. I can totally see him watching it gets better with his "i'm so sorry" face... I'd love it if you could make a sequel and we could watch him evolve from the inside, like an insight into his mental secret diary.

[jennybliss]

I am glad that you liked it. Dave is one of my favorite characters because he has so much going on beyond what you see.

[sweetwaterpink]

This is so good. My heart aches for Dave in this story.

[jennybliss]

Me too! I am glad that you liked it!

[angelbabe_cj]

Oh, Dave.

Such a good portrayal of his inner turmoil.

[jennybliss]

Thank you! I tried to keep it in character.

[jennybliss]

Thank you! I was really trying to get across the highs and lows of what it must be like for someone like Dave.

[jennybliss]

I love the character of Dave Karofsky. I can't even tell you what really draws me to him.

I really am glad that the internal struggle that he has shows so well. I can't imagine that he hasn't thought about trying to kill himself. He is just such a complex character.

I do have to say that I was a little worried when I wrote this that I was using to many homophobic slurs. I mean some of them are kinda harsh. I just felt like someone like Dave, who spends all of his time with guy's guys, would think in those terms. He hasn't gotten to the point where they are not part of his vocabulary. I am glad that you think that his voice is right.

*hugs* I am so glad that you liked it.