fic post: untitled cracky Eleanor fic

[jenoofer]

A couple of weeks ago, I promised to write Eleanor fic for Emily, who asked for a story about "Eleanor seducing anyone you think would have a funny reaction to it

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[thedarkevilone]

[jenoofer]

Yay internets! The internet is shiny and black. I likes it.

[meobnal]

LOLOLOLOL!

Made of win. The Eleanor dialogue was delicious ♥

[jenoofer]

Thank you! I'm glad the dialogue worked. Eleanor is tough to write.

[ali_babble]

Awesome! This cheered me up big time. However hard you worked at getting Eleanor's dialogue it really payed off! You had her down to a tee.

Athough the thought of Eleanor and Bob Fossil together kind of disturbs me both being played by Rich but then knowing Bob Fossil he'd go for anything! And so would Eleanor, even if Bob has been known to do some rather effeminate dance moves!

Great job, jenoofer! I've made a brilliant LJ friend who I've met in real life but she's not a Boosh fan, so as far as I know you might be the first.

[jenoofer]

So glad you liked it! And I'm pleased you thought the dialogue worked - it's what I struggle with most about writing.

And yay first!

[gothimp]

Brilliant!
Hilarious!
More brilliant!
You got Eleanor exactly right.
Very well done.

I'm afraid I can think of at least two other couples who got together after meeting on BSH.
Sorry if that's a disappointment :o(
I guess there are a lot of lovely, like-minded people in this fandom.

Congratulations on your three-month-together-ness :oD

[jenoofer]

Thank you so much!

I did rather think that the BSH must have brought couples together before now, although it would have been a small privelige to be the first.

And thanks!

[violence4]

AHAHAHAHA this was a work of genius! Genius, I say!!

They were both so in character... God, it was fantastic. Especially Fossil's lines at the end!!!

And I'm not sure why but this practically had me rolling on the floor:
she slowly sashayed her way across the dance floor, using her hips to remove any people who happened to get in between her and the delicious slice of love pie she had set her sights upon.
I think it's the image of Eleanor bumping people out the way with her hips... that and Fossil being referred to as a "slice of love pie" XD

Win!

xxx

[jenoofer]

I'm so glad everyone's saying it's in character - I've never written either of these two before, and I always panic about writing new characters.

That line was one of the first I wrote, so I just made myself laugh reading it back again!

Glad you liked it!

xxx