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rarepairrecs June 10 2009, 21:17:39 UTC
When will you update!?

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jenszabo June 13 2009, 02:59:26 UTC
I'll be putting up the next few chapters at least this weekend. Hope you enjoy them. Love your icon, btw.

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rarepairrecs June 13 2009, 04:52:38 UTC
Hooray!

And thank you, I'd been looking for a funny one and this just screamed out at me.

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bluebronzisland June 16 2009, 13:16:34 UTC
“It’s just you and this series of moments, a million decisions you make - all to try to figure out just the right way to slide through this chaos and do what you set out to do.”

very poetic once again. i guess marcus does have a brain in there after all. ;)

“If this has anything to do with the Hokey Pokey, you are in for a world of hurt, Flint.” Katie said firmly.

hahaha. love it! :P

ohh the backrub. so jealous of katie. :D hehe. that is, until things start to go downhill again...

i love all of their practice scenes, especially when katie finally hurts him, and the conversation that ensues. <3

also, i think the chapters are labeled wrong after this, because this one is #9 and called Insinuation, but then you have #10 called the same thing and it's parts 2 a + b. or maybe i'm just missing something.

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jenszabo June 20 2009, 21:20:08 UTC
YOU LIKED THE HOKEY POKEY LINE! Thank you!

Glad you liked the practice scenes. It was fun to write something where we got to see them interact in different ways.

The chapter labeling is...annoying, I agree. I originally posted Insinuation in two parts about a month apart because it was like 20,000 words long all total and taking me forever to write. Then lj is stupid and has this tiny word limit so I had to split part 2 into 2 parts. So...yeah, annoying and I'm sorry.

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bloodyzabini December 6 2009, 11:14:43 UTC
does Katie suffer of an hormonal explosion?
The fantasies, we can all picture them, and it makes us imagine what their first time wil be.
And the gap ptw the fantasie and the gryff chatting was great =)

Awww Davies... This guy is mythic xD

I love how thy neve admit anything, Katie with watching him more than other and Marcus who wants to go out with her...

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