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liselle2010 April 21 2011, 12:02:01 UTC
This story is just so much fun. I love the well rounded stories that actually include other characters and just aren't our favorite duo off in their own litle bubble...although those are fun too. I do so enjoy a little Clark bashing. I would have loved on this show if Chloe and Clark would have had a coversation about her feeling for Oliver. He was always going on about Lois but never really bothered to question hers about Oliver even after everything she went through for him and for them. Okay, too early in the morning. I am officially rambling. Wonderful new part! Can't wait to see where it goes next!

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jenwin23 April 21 2011, 17:12:32 UTC
I never really thought about the lack of Chloe talking to Clark about Ollie. I guess in the beginning it was a secret, then she was anxious about where their FWB arrangement was going, then of course she was gone, but once she came back...

I'm trying to focus to move the story development, but couldn't resist including Hex's storyline.

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saurina April 21 2011, 18:37:43 UTC
Second part is just as brilliant as the first!!

I liked that you didn't go down the road and let Zatana grant Chloe and Oliver a wish, I like it better if their feelings for each other progress naturally. Also let's face it, whenever Zatana grant a wish it goes bonkers;)

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jenwin23 April 21 2011, 22:04:34 UTC
That's too easy and another story I think. Besides wishing for that takes away the other person's free will which is all kinds of sketchy.

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