Epiphanies [10 of ?] PG13 for now

[jenwin23]

Author: jenwin23
Title: Epiphanies
Rating: PG13 for now
Summary: Chloe realizes something right before she marries Jimmy and changes her mind. Returning to her life her friends try to figure out what happened but Chloe is just trying to figure out where she goes from here.
Disclaimer: Clearly not mine. I barely even know anything about Smallville so

Comments

[fridaloop]

Hi, I just started reading your story on FF.net. I'm only on chapter 8 I think (I'm reading on my phone so I'm not sure), and so far I love it! I like Chlollie but I didn't care for how the show developed their relationship, so it's great to read a story that actually shows things progressing. You write Chloe and Oliver really well, and I can't tell you enough how much I love that Chloe is back at the DP in your story. I loved Reporter!Chloe, and always felt that she needed to go back to journalism.

Also, I'm really not a fan of SV's Lois, so I generally try to avoid fics that feature her heavily. One problem I see in a lot of Chlollie fics is that Lois becomes SuperCousin, far more involved and supportive to Chloe than we've ever seen on the show. I love how you write Lois though! She's a big part of Chloe's life, but in a more realistic way. I also love what you did with Hex, an episode I absolutely loathed.

Well, just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy your story.

[jenwin23]

Thanks for the review. I haven't updated in awhile, I'm on vacation this week and thought I'd have some time to write, but a niece and nephew both under the age of three are more tiring than I'd thought.

I wanted to give Chloe back some of what she was and her own self determination. The show got nonsensical, so I wanted to "fix" some of that. Chloe got lost and Lois was exaggerated, always assumed to be great without any evidence to support it.

I didn't plan to write in Lois, but she came into the story and stuck. Chloe is still her own person, free and independent of Lois and Clark.