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If I Could Turn Back Time [11 pt2 of ?15] PG13

May 23, 2012 00:16

Part 2, Chapter 11, If I Could Turn Back Time

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!multi chapter, character: oliver queen, fic, chlollie, author: jenwin23, character: chloe sullivan, rating: pg-13

Comments 12

jediyoda99 May 23 2012, 08:37:59 UTC

This is now officially my guilty pleasure fic. I love how Oliver annoys Chloe at first most especially when he was trying crush the young guy's crush on Chloe. Furthermore, his thirst for knowledge about her has him discover new things about her - interesting insights that he would have missed in the investigations. Lastly, what Lois said is true. No matter what time Chloe is in, she and Oliver usually find themselves.Its kismet as they say

jenwin23 May 24 2012, 06:22:14 UTC

Why a guilty pleasure? A pleasure, ok, but guilty?

Oliver is being a brat to Chloe, who is trying to keep her ire up around him.

Lois is def going to push Chloe, but so will Oliver. And don't count out the Queens.

madlenita May 23 2012, 09:20:15 UTC

So Oliver don't like idea of Chloe dating someone ;-)...
Thanks for this chapter and i can't waiting for next chapter...

jenwin23 May 24 2012, 06:22:43 UTC

Oliver's not sure what he feels about Chloe, but he's starting to clue in.

shiawling May 23 2012, 15:26:06 UTC

I just love love this story. I love that Oliver wants to know more about Chloe. Maybe he will find out about the sacrifice she made for him and he will do the right thing and not Chloe go no matter what she said.

jenwin23 May 24 2012, 06:23:17 UTC

If Oliver were going to find out about the time travel, it won't happen for a long time.

purple_moon123 May 24 2012, 00:11:58 UTC

Sorry for being lazy and not commenting sooner!!!
I'm in love with this story!!! It was very interesting seeing Chloe making all the time jumps and how different her life and that of others changed.

Ali is a great addition to the story!! I just love how she just asked Chloe when she lost her virginity right in front of Oliver.

Much kudos to how Oliver became the GA in this timeline!!!!

Can't wait for more!!!

jenwin23 May 24 2012, 06:25:13 UTC

Glad you're enjoying it. Adding the Queens into the story is interesting, I'm glad people are accepting the characters as I'm writing them.

Poor Chloe, being put on the spot like that.

hednin May 24 2012, 11:27:05 UTC

Wow, that was fast... I love it, you make me very happy, but I didn`t review your chapter until I read it twice, The first time I'm so excited to know what happened that... I always lost details...

I like very much the way Oliver became Green Arrow, is a good explanation and very consistent with the character, Oliver act as stuborn as always,is kind of funny how offended he is when Chloe says "Jerk", by the way, Why did the jerk follow Chloe? Remorse?

Ali is finding her ground, it's great although, this will make Oliver age faster...

I really really enjoy this chapter (Oh¡ poor neighbor)

The last waiting was short, thank you for that. I'll just be here, waiting with espectation for your next chapter. Ejem

PD: The banner is awesome,seriously, awesome.