Beast Fic: Four Times Yoseob Keeps Doojoon Awake, And One Time He Doesn’t

[jeonggam]

Title: Four Times Yoseob Keeps Doojoon Awake, And One Time He Doesn’t
Author: lookatmoiye7
Rating: PG
Characters: Doojoon, Yoseob
Word Count: ~1650
Author's Note: This is what I do instead of homework. Self-discipline, I do not possess.
Summary: The other members don’t seem to mind, are somehow able to ignore it, or at least block out the noise, but Doojoon

Comments

[biases]

So I read this on my phone on the bus pretty much as soon as you posted it and then got home and searched for Beast icons so I could comment on it and by the time I got that sorted I was no longer able to say "FIRST!" and be all proud and stuff. ;_;

ANYWAY this was adorable, I may have had to check which one was Doojoon after reading (my initial image was the wrong guy, it turns out I was imagining Kikwang) but I enjoyed it anyway and I loved the dynamic you presented, with Doojoon being the responsible hyung and Yoseob being the adorable one (with the 'cute concept'! ♥)

“Happy new year, Doojoon-ah!” he cries, his face etched with colour, and even though Doojoon feels like collapsing, even though they are due to perform in minutes and Yoseob has surely messed up his make-up, he can't help but smile in return.

I loved that line - you balanced the moment beautifully with the make-up part. And:

“Goodnight, Doojie,” he says instead, ignoring his leader and hugging his hand to his chest. Even though he knows a cramp is inevitable,

[jeonggam]

THAT IS OKAY. JUST THE FACT THAT YOU READ IT MAKES ME GLEE. Plus, your icon!!! That was worth waiting for!

Hooray! You know it's them that's adorable, though. I just try to creepily capture their essence. If it worked, then I am satisfied! *grins* (And, you know what, as long as I helped increase your general Beast knowledge, I can't really complain, can I? WIN ALL AROUND.)

Doojoon being the responsible hyung and Yoseob being the adorable one

Ha, you kind of captured their dynamic right there. HOW ARE THEY SO CUTE TOGETHER? UGH, I DON'T EVEN KNOW.

I WANT A DOOJOON OF MY OWN TOO. OH NO WAIT, I ALREADY DO. *HUGS YOU MADLY*

THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENT. I WOULD KISS YOU BUT I CAN'T. JUST KISS YOURSELF AND PRETEND IT WAS ME. ♥

[rangikucharlize]

Just so adorable I can't put it into words <3 My fav part was the new years one :P

[jeonggam]

It's them! They make anything adorable! It was so much fun to write.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[love_etcetera]

Your writing is really natural and smooth, I loved it! And your take on this pairing is so adorable, subtle and refreshing at the same time :)

[jeonggam]

Oh, thank you so much! I'm very happy that you enjoyed it! I love these two, so writing them was definitely a pleasure.

Thanks again! ♥

[nacom202]

It's 3:49AM and I can't get to sleep.
But after reading this, I think I'll quote refreshed myself *_*
Thank you~♥

[jeonggam]

Oh, I hope you sleep better soon! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thank you for the comment. <3

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[anonymous]

And I have faced it. We can communicate on this theme.