21. love is like a sin, my love

[jeremy_finch]

title: love is like a sin, my love (for the ones that feel it the most)
chapters: (1/1)
fandom: the vampire diaries
character/pairing: klaus/caroline
rating: R
word count: ~3470
spoilers: 3x14, but not much
summary: Klaus aims to take, to ravage-not to please. / Or, Klaus’ kleptomania gets the better of him at the Mikaelson ball.
notes: written for the

Comments

[tenshinrtaiga]

Loved it, however there was a bit of a mistake (or at least I hope it was a mistake) here:
"because he killed her, fucked her and then killed her"

You had it as a list which implies that he killed her and then he fucked her. I think you meant to use a semicolon instead of a comma after the first "killed her". Normally, I wouldn't care about such a small mistake but because of the wording, I spent the rest of the fic wondering if Klaus was a necrophiliac...

Other than that distracting bit, loved the fic :)

[jeremy_finch]

Fixed that! Thanks for pointing it out to me (:

Thanks, glad you liked it.

[jeremy_finch]

omg no stop, I'm still very much a n00b at all of this, and as usual alex you leave no reservations when it comes to complimenting me XDD

CROUCHING TIGERS OF THE WORLD, UNITE!

[swirlsofblue]

I love this, especially your use of imagery :)

[jeremy_finch]

Thank you! :) That's my favourite part of writing tbh.

[turtle_goose]

Beautifully, beautifully written. :)

And basically anytime the girl turns the tables on the guy I'm happy. :D

[jeremy_finch]

And basically anytime the girl turns the tables on the guy I'm happy. :D
a big stinking YES to this. and also: You read a Klaroline fic! YOU READ KLAROLINE OH LET ME LOVE YOU BB <3

[eternal_moonie]

Absolutely LOVED it!!!

[jeremy_finch]

thank you!