Fic: When I Saw You

Jan 28, 2014 11:15

Title: When I saw you
Author:jeri_1116
Rating: G
W/C: 1,186
Warnings: Might be crap, at this point who the fuck knows.
Disclaimer: I don't own Luke and Noah. Me owning them would be amazing tho- the lack of unnecessary break ups, the non use of blindness to prolong a already dying story would be evident. #Astheworldturnssucks. #crapwriters ( Read more... )

fluff, luke/noah

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cindyls1969 January 28 2014, 16:32:38 UTC
Sigh. I love these boys. Your version is wonderful and you make me smile at them again and again. They are awkward, clumsy and perfect. Thank you!

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jeri_1116 February 6 2014, 16:31:54 UTC
Glad you liked. Thanks for reading.

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nukefan1959 January 28 2014, 17:01:55 UTC
You manage to make sure that we fall in love with them all over again, you can see this whole story playing out what a shame that it couldn't of been filmed.

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jeri_1116 February 6 2014, 16:32:39 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. Thank you. :)

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scj0710 January 28 2014, 17:26:20 UTC
Oh, my gosh! The smile on my face is all thanks to you! I have completely melted. Wow - When I Saw You is absolute perfection! Thank you for the sunshine today...

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jeri_1116 February 6 2014, 16:34:39 UTC
I'm psyched it put a smile on your smile, I was hoping it would for most. Thanks for reading. :)

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valenti1965 January 28 2014, 18:28:56 UTC
Love fics where they discover they fancy one another and live HEA!

Sigh....so wonderful!

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jeri_1116 February 6 2014, 16:35:46 UTC
:D :D Glad you liked Lou, thanks bb, for reading. :D

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sarahsezlove January 28 2014, 19:24:52 UTC
This is such a lovely first time fic, Arsena.
I love that, while we get Luke's perspective, we know Noah was feeling something similar.
Beautifully done.

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jeri_1116 February 6 2014, 16:37:40 UTC
So happy you liked it Sarah, I thought for sure it was epic fail, but I'm glad it wasn't. *kisses*

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