Ok here we go

[jermtastic]

This is a very small part of a story I've had in my head for a while now. I almost have the beginning of it but this is a very small piece of what probably the middle of it will be like. Most of the names are real generic because I haven't thought of the right ones yet but tell me what you think

Comments

[tragicartistry]

I like it. Good so far.

:D

[mrmatticus]

i really like it :D